Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Trata de evitar muletillas como "uh" y de ser más conciso y natural en tus respuestas. Además, intenta usar conectores para que tu respuesta sea más coherente y fluida.

예시: I don't enjoy buying shoes often because I find it time-consuming and overwhelming. Therefore, I only shop when necessary and try to make quick purchases.

제안: Evita repetir palabras y completa tus ideas para que la respuesta sea clara y coherente. Usa conectores para enlazar tus ideas y mejorar la fluidez.

예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it allows me to find the right size, brand, and style easily through well-known store websites.

제안: Procura evitar repeticiones y errores gramaticales, y usa conectores para que la respuesta sea más clara y natural. Además, intenta ser más específico en tus explicaciones.

예시: I usually spend more on shoes than most people because I prefer high-quality and durable pairs. Although they are expensive, I save money in the long run since I only need to buy shoes once or twice a year.

제안: Evita las repeticiones y completa tus ideas para que la respuesta sea coherente y natural. Usa conectores para enlazar tus razones y dar una explicación clara.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them most of the time. Since I work and exercise at home, comfort is more important than fashion for me.

× I think it's time consuming and uh, sometimes overwhelming.

✓ I think it's time-consuming and, uh, sometimes overwhelming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in a predicate adjective position to correctly modify the noun or subject.

× I try to use the websites of well known stores in order to to catch the pair of shoes that I like in size, brand and stylish.

✓ I try to use the websites of well-known stores in order to find the pair of shoes that I like in size, brand, and style.

The phrase 'to catch the pair of shoes' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'find' when referring to locating items online. Also, 'stylish' is an adjective, but here a noun 'style' is needed to match 'size' and 'brand'. Additionally, 'well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× Although they are expensive, I think in the long run I spent less money because I need to to buy a pair of shoes once or maybe twice a year.

✓ Although they are expensive, I think in the long run I spend less money because I need to buy a pair of shoes once or maybe twice a year.

The verb 'spent' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a general truth or habitual action, so the present tense 'spend' is appropriate here.

× I think I spend more money in shoes than most people because I try to choose the ones that are high quality and durable.

✓ I think I spend more money on shoes than most people because I try to choose the ones that are high quality and durable.

The correct preposition to use with 'spend money' is 'on', not 'in'.