Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
No, I don't like to buy shoes. I don't have much money to buy shoes, so I usually buy shoes. Shoes of my mom. My mom always special for me. How often about the one most?
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, I have bought shoes about one years ago because I was a soldier that time so I can't go out so that I need to buy shoes online.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend on shows about 500 hundred money. I are you rude? Don't spend, uh, spend for each lot of money.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I don't care about it. I think comfortable shoes are better than fashionable shoes, so I always buy comfortable shoes. For example. It will improve my life level, that's it.
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총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 40.0제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.
예시: No, I don't like buying shoes very often because I don't have much money. Usually, I wear my mom's shoes since she kindly shares them with me.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct grammar and linking words to make it more natural and coherent. Also, be more specific about the experience.
예시: Yes, I bought shoes online about a year ago because I was serving as a soldier and couldn't go out. Therefore, buying online was the only option for me.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 30.0제안: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Please answer directly with a clear amount and explain your spending habits using proper vocabulary and sentence structure.
예시: I usually spend around 500 dollars on shoes. However, I try not to spend too much money on each pair.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer shows your preference but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because they help me stay active and improve my quality of life.
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