Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I don't like buying shoes often. I usually buy them only when necessary, such as when my old shoes are broken."

예시: I don't like buying shoes often. I usually buy them only when necessary, such as when my old shoes are broken.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and could be more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I have. Buying shoes online is cheaper than in shops, and if you know your size, it is a good option."

예시: Yes, I have. Buying shoes online is cheaper than in shops, and if you know your size, it is a good option.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors in vocabulary and grammar. Use correct currency terms and clearer sentence structure. For example, "I usually spend around 1,000 baht on shoes. The most expensive pair I bought online cost 50,000 baht."

예시: I usually spend around 1,000 baht on shoes. The most expensive pair I bought online cost 50,000 baht.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to express your preference clearly and provide reasons with correct grammar. For example, "I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them every day. Fashionable shoes might look good, but sometimes they are uncomfortable and I have to change them during the day."

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them every day. Fashionable shoes might look good, but sometimes they are uncomfortable and I have to change them during the day.

× I buy the shoes when it's necessaries.

✓ I buy shoes when it's necessary.

The word 'necessaries' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'necessary' to describe when you buy shoes. Also, 'the shoes' is unnecessary; 'shoes' without 'the' is more natural in this context.

× I usually buy the shoes when if the old one is broken.

✓ I usually buy shoes when the old one is broken.

The phrase 'when if' is incorrect; only one conjunction should be used. 'When' is appropriate here to indicate the time condition.

× Yes I have, buying online shoes is cheaper than in the shop.

✓ Yes, I have. Buying shoes online is cheaper than in the shop.

The phrase 'buying online shoes' is awkward; 'buying shoes online' is the correct word order. Also, a period is needed after 'Yes, I have' to separate the sentences.

× If you know your size you buying shoe online is a good option.

✓ If you know your size, buying shoes online is a good option.

The phrase 'you buying shoe online' is incorrect. It should be 'buying shoes online' as the subject of the sentence. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause.

× I usually spend around 1000 baths with shoes.

✓ I usually spend around 1000 baht on shoes.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate spending money. Also, the currency is 'baht', not 'baths'.

× The expensive one that I buy the shoe online is 50,000 bars.

✓ The most expensive pair of shoes that I bought online cost 50,000 baht.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'The expensive one' should be 'The most expensive pair of shoes'; 'buy' should be past tense 'bought' to match the context; 'the shoe' should be plural 'shoes'; 'bars' is incorrect currency, should be 'baht'; and 'is' should be 'cost' to refer to price.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because it's can use for everyday life.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because they can be used for everyday life.

'It's' (it is) is incorrect when referring to plural 'shoes'; 'they' is the correct pronoun. Also, 'can use' should be passive 'can be used' to indicate suitability.

× If you buy the shoes with a fashion, sometime you have to take off and change to the island to shoot in the middle of the day.

✓ If you buy fashionable shoes, sometimes you have to take them off and change to sandals in the middle of the day.

'With a fashion' is incorrect; 'fashionable shoes' is correct. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Take off and change to the island to shoot' is unclear and likely a mistranslation; 'take them off and change to sandals' is a reasonable correction. Also, 'shoes' is plural, so 'them' is needed.