Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'watching' and clarify your points with better linking words. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and correct minor grammatical errors.

예시: I don't buy shoes very often because I already have enough pairs for daily use. However, I enjoy browsing different websites to see the latest shoe styles, even though I rarely make a purchase.

제안: Your answer lacks coherence and contains repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I find it inconvenient because if the shoes don't fit, I have to return them. Therefore, I prefer buying shoes in physical stores where I can try them on before purchasing.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent by reducing hesitations and filler words. Also, try to explain your reasoning more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I usually spend about 30 pounds every six months on shoes because I see them as a necessity rather than a fashion statement. I prefer to buy affordable shoes that meet my basic needs.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points with specific details.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones. For instance, I have a favorite pair that I wear daily until they are completely worn out because comfort is my top priority.

× As long as I have few pairs to wear every day, I'm contented.

✓ As long as I have a few pairs to wear every day, I'm contented.

The phrase 'few pairs' without an article implies almost none, which is likely not the intended meaning. Using 'a few pairs' correctly indicates a small but sufficient number of pairs. This is a singular/plural quantifier issue.

× I love watching the watching different websites, different styles of shoes, but I don't have a habit of buying.

✓ I love watching different websites, different styles of shoes, but I don't have a habit of buying.

The phrase 'watching the watching' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'the watching' corrects the sentence. Also, 'watching' is not the best verb for websites; 'browsing' would be better, but as per instructions, only grammar mistakes from the list are corrected.

× Disadvantage of buying shoes online?

✓ Is there a disadvantage of buying shoes online?

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks the verb 'is' and the existential 'there' to form a proper question. This is a 'There be' issue where the sentence needs 'Is there' to be grammatically correct.

× If their shoes didn't fit, you have to return it.

✓ If the shoes don't fit, you have to return them.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here because it refers to possession by people, but the sentence is about the shoes themselves. Also, 'didn't' (past tense) conflicts with 'have to' (present). Changing to present tense 'don't' and matching plural pronoun 'them' corrects the sentence.

× If their shoes didn't fit, you have to return it.

✓ If the shoes don't fit, you have to return them.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't fit' with present tense 'have to return'. For general truths or habitual actions, present tense should be used consistently.

× I prefer 1 shoe that's very comfortable for me to wear every day.

✓ I prefer one pair of shoes that's very comfortable for me to wear every day.

Saying '1 shoe' is unusual because shoes are typically worn in pairs. Using 'one pair of shoes' is the correct singular/plural form.

× I wear them every day till it gets on out.

✓ I wear them every day until they wear out.

The phrase 'gets on out' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'wear out' meaning the shoes become unusable. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural 'shoes'.