Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
I don't like buying shoes and there's not a stable time for me to buy new shoes. I don't think buying too too much of them is a necessary thing and it wastes my money.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, at that time I bought that shoes because I like its color. But for me I prefer buying shoes offline because I can wear them and and know if they are suitable to my feet or not.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Usually CN¥400 to CN¥500 for me. I only need sports shoes now because they are light and convenient, suitable for every condition, so I usually don't cost too much on them.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer comfortable shoes because I often wear them everywhere and mostly in PE classes. So it is very important to wear a comfortable sport shoes. The fashionable shoes for me are too expensive since I don't have a have a job now.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有重复词汇（"too too much"），且句子结构较为简单。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且可以适当丰富细节。
예시: I don't enjoy buying shoes very much, so I only purchase them when absolutely necessary. I believe buying too many shoes is unnecessary and a waste of money.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答直接，但存在语法错误（"that shoes"应为"those shoes"），且有重复词汇（"and and"）。建议注意语法和发音的准确性，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I once bought a pair of shoes online because I liked their color. However, I prefer buying shoes in physical stores since I can try them on to see if they fit well.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 68.0제안: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误（"I usually don't cost too much on them"应为"I usually don't spend too much on them"）。建议注意句子结构和用词准确性。
예시: I usually spend around CN¥400 to CN¥500 on shoes. Since I mainly buy sports shoes, which are lightweight and versatile, I don't need to spend a lot.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 72.0제안: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但存在语法错误（"a comfortable sport shoes"应为"comfortable sports shoes"），且有重复词汇（"have a have a job"）。建议注意语法和避免重复，同时可以用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them everywhere, especially during PE classes. Moreover, fashionable shoes are too expensive for me since I currently don't have a job.
문법
× I don't like buying shoes and there's not a stable time for me to buy new shoes.
✓ I don't like buying shoes and there isn't a stable time for me to buy new shoes.
这里使用了缩写形式"there's"，但后面接的是否定结构，应该用"there isn't"。"There is"用于肯定句，否定句应使用"there is not"或缩写"there isn't"。
× Yes, at that time I bought that shoes because I like its color.
✓ Yes, at that time I bought those shoes because I like their color.
"shoes"是复数名词，指示代词应使用复数形式"those"，而不是单数"that"。同时，代词"its"用于单数，复数应使用"their"。
× But for me I prefer buying shoes offline because I can wear them and and know if they are suitable to my feet or not.
✓ But for me, I prefer buying shoes offline because I can wear them and know if they are suitable for my feet or not.
句中"and and"重复，应删除一个"and"。此外，"suitable to"应改为"suitable for"，这是固定搭配。
× Usually CN¥400 to CN¥500 for me.
✓ Usually I spend CN¥400 to CN¥500.
原句缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整。应补充动词"spend"，使句子完整。
× I only need sports shoes now because they are light and convenient, suitable for every condition, so I usually don't cost too much on them.
✓ I only need sports shoes now because they are light and convenient, suitable for every condition, so I usually don't spend too much on them.
"cost"通常不用于第一人称主动花费，应该用"spend"来表达花费钱财。
× So it is very important to wear a comfortable sport shoes.
✓ So it is very important to wear comfortable sports shoes.
"shoes"是复数名词，前面不应加不定冠词"a"，且"sport shoes"应改为复数形式"sports shoes"。
× The fashionable shoes for me are too expensive since I don't have a have a job now.
✓ Fashionable shoes for me are too expensive since I don't have a job now.
"The fashionable shoes"中的定冠词"The"在此处不必要，且"have a have a job"重复，应删除一个"have a"。
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