Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应直接回应问题，避免重复。可以先明确回答喜欢买鞋，然后说明频率和原因，句子结构更清晰。

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy them about once a month because I am a college student and prefer comfortable shoes that fit my daily needs.

제안: 回答较好，但可以用连接词使句子更连贯，同时增加具体细节使内容更丰富。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient. Moreover, there are many shopping platforms in China, so I can easily find the styles I like.

제안: 回答应更完整，先直接回答问题，再解释原因。可以使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I usually spend almost 800 RMB on shoes because I want to save money for other things, so I avoid buying very expensive shoes.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I exercise every day. However, it would be great if they are also fashionable.

× How often? Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

“How often?” 是一个疑问句，不能作为回答的一部分。学生应该直接回答“Yes, I do.”，去掉“How often?”。

× I love doing sports and I so I need comfortable shoes.

✓ I love doing sports, so I need comfortable shoes.

“and I so I” 是错误的连接词使用，应改为“so”连接两个句子，表示因果关系。

× However, if they combine fashion that will be great.

✓ However, if they combine fashion, that will be great.

条件句中“if”后面应有逗号分隔主句和从句，缺少逗号导致句子结构不清晰。