Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
I like to purchase shoes a little. And the unusually by that, twice a year my favorite brand is Nike or Puma.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
I have never buy the shoes before because I'm afraid of it. Not suiting my foot.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spent my money around ¥5000 on buying new shoes. I think it is fewer than ordinary people because.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because we always. Wear the our shoots when I walk and go around.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。頻度や好きなブランドについて明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy them twice a year. My favorite brands are Nike and Puma.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: 文法ミスがあり、理由の説明が不明瞭です。過去形の正しい使用と、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。
예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am afraid they might not fit my feet properly.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 45.0제안: 時制の誤りと文の未完成があります。現在形を使い、理由を具体的に述べることが重要です。
예시: I usually spend about ¥5000 on new shoes, which is less than most people because I prefer affordable options.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 40.0제안: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、理由の説明が不明瞭です。正しい表現で理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I wear them all day when I walk and go out.
문법
× I like to purchase shoes a little.
✓ I like purchasing shoes a little.
The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Using 'to purchase' is not incorrect but less natural in this context. Changing to 'purchasing' improves fluency.
× And the unusually by that, twice a year my favorite brand is Nike or Puma.
✓ Usually, I buy them twice a year. My favorite brands are Nike or Puma.
The original sentence has incorrect conjunction and awkward phrasing. Starting with 'And the unusually by that' is ungrammatical. Rephrasing to 'Usually, I buy them twice a year' clarifies the meaning and corrects the conjunction misuse.
× I have never buy the shoes before because I'm afraid of it.
✓ I have never bought shoes before because I'm afraid of it.
After 'have never', the past participle form of the verb should be used. 'Buy' is the base form; the correct past participle is 'bought'. This is a common error with present perfect tense.
× Not suiting my foot.
✓ They might not suit my feet.
The original fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Also, 'foot' should be plural 'feet' when referring generally. Adding 'They might not suit my feet' completes the sentence and corrects pronoun and number usage.
× I usually spent my money around ¥5000 on buying new shoes.
✓ I usually spend around ¥5000 on buying new shoes.
The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'spend' rather than the past tense 'spent'. Using past tense here is incorrect.
× I think it is fewer than ordinary people because.
✓ I think it is less than what ordinary people spend because...
'Fewer' is used with countable nouns, while 'less' is used with uncountable quantities like money. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.
× I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because we always.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because we always...
The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. 'Rather than' is correctly used here, but the sentence needs completion to be grammatically correct.
× Wear the our shoots when I walk and go around.
✓ I wear our shoes when I walk and go around.
The phrase 'the our shoots' is incorrect. 'Our' is a possessive pronoun and does not need 'the'. Also, 'shoots' is a misspelling of 'shoes'. The subject 'I' is needed for clarity.
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