Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте грамматических ошибок и избыточности. Например, "white shoes makes you higher" звучит неестественно и неясно. Лучше объяснить, почему именно белые туфли нравятся, и использовать связующие слова.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially white ones because they look stylish and can make me appear taller. I usually buy new shoes about once a month.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности, например, "my forces on side Pindodo" не понятно. Следует использовать правильные слова и грамматику, а также связные предложения для логичности.

예시: Yes, I bought a pair of sneakers online two months ago from a website called Pindodo. Although the price was low, the quality was disappointing because the shoes were made in China.

제안: Ответ нечеткий и содержит повторения. Следует четко указать сумму и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит уточнить валюту и объяснить, почему такая сумма является средней.

예시: I usually spend more than 10,000 rubles on shoes each year, which I believe is an average amount. Some people might spend up to 20,000 rubles annually.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткости, например, "I prefer bus" не понятно. Следует использовать полные предложения и связующие слова, чтобы объяснить предпочтения более ясно и естественно.

예시: I prefer both comfortable and fashionable shoes. I usually wear comfortable shoes for running or sports, while I choose fashionable ones for social events and hanging out with friends.

× Yeah, of course I like buying shoes, especially white ones, because white shoes makes you higher and usually I buy shoes once a month.

✓ Yeah, of course I like buying shoes, especially white ones, because white shoes make you higher and usually I buy shoes once a month.

The subject 'white shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.

× Yeah, two months ago I bought my forces on side Pindodo and it was really cheap, but the quality isn't good enough because it came from China and China's.

✓ Yeah, two months ago I bought my forces on site Pindodo and it was really cheap, but the quality wasn't good enough because it came from China.

The phrase 'isn't good enough' should be in past tense 'wasn't good enough' to match the past context. Also, 'China's' at the end is unclear and likely a mistake, so it was removed for clarity.

× I spent more, more than 10,000 and I think that's average cost and everyone another person would spend more than 10,000, maybe around 20,000 a year.

✓ I spend more, more than 10,000 and I think that's the average cost and every other person would spend more than 10,000, maybe around 20,000 a year.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the context is habitual action, so 'spend' in present tense is correct. Also, 'everyone another person' is incorrect; it should be 'every other person'. Added 'the' before 'average cost' for correctness.

× I prefer bus. I would buy the comfortable 1 and fashionable one. Comfortable for running or doing another sports and fashionable for events and hanging out with friends.

✓ I prefer both. I would buy the comfortable one and the fashionable one. Comfortable for running or doing other sports and fashionable for events and hanging out with friends.

'bus' is likely a typo for 'both'. '1' should be 'one'. 'another sports' is incorrect; 'other sports' is correct because 'sports' is plural.