Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I really like buying shoes. Uh, special is basketball shoes. Uh, I often buy twice or sorry, three times a year.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Oh yeah, I have bought through Allies. Oh, it's just last week I bought in, uh, webbed such at Amazon's Shopee and especially is V&B shop web.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Actually, I usually spend from $100 to $300 on shoes. It's not cheap and it's not too expensive, so I think it's comfortable.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
Oh I prefer both. Fashionable shoes I will wear it when I have go to the parties or special events and comfortable shoes I will wear it when I go to school or go to play some things like badminton or football.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn thích loại giày nào và tần suất mua giày như thế nào một cách mạch lạc và ngắn gọn.
예시: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially basketball shoes. I usually buy new ones about three times a year.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Bạn cũng nên sắp xếp câu trả lời mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Just last week, I purchased some from websites like Amazon, Shopee, and especially from the V&B shop.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng bạn nên tránh dùng từ "comfortable" để mô tả giá cả vì nó không phù hợp. Thay vào đó, bạn có thể dùng từ như "reasonable" hoặc "affordable". Hãy mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do bạn chi tiêu như vậy.
예시: I usually spend between $100 and $300 on shoes. I think this price range is reasonable because it balances quality and affordability.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu. Ví dụ, tránh dùng "I have go" mà nên dùng "I go" hoặc "I have to go". Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm lý do lựa chọn của bạn.
예시: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. I wear fashionable shoes to parties or special events, while comfortable shoes are my choice for school or playing sports like badminton and football.
문법
× Uh, special is basketball shoes.
✓ Uh, especially basketball shoes.
The phrase 'special is basketball shoes' is incorrect because 'special' is an adjective and does not fit here. The intended meaning is 'especially basketball shoes', which is an adverb modifying the statement. The error is related to word choice rather than singular/plural, but since no exact category fits better, this is the closest correction.
× I often buy twice or sorry, three times a year.
✓ I often buy shoes two or, sorry, three times a year.
The original sentence lacks the object 'shoes' after 'buy', which makes it incomplete. Also, 'twice or sorry, three times' is awkward; 'two or, sorry, three times' is clearer. The issue relates to sentence structure and clarity.
× Oh yeah, I have bought through Allies.
✓ Oh yeah, I have bought from Allies.
The preposition 'through' is incorrect here; when referring to purchasing from a store or seller, 'from' is the correct preposition.
× Oh, it's just last week I bought in, uh, webbed such at Amazon's Shopee and especially is V&B shop web.
✓ Oh, just last week I bought on websites such as Amazon, Shopee, and especially the V&B shop website.
The phrase 'bought in, uh, webbed such at Amazon's Shopee' is incorrect. The correct preposition for online shopping is 'on' websites. Also, 'webbed such' is a mispronunciation or error for 'websites such as'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper preposition use.
× Fashionable shoes I will wear it when I have go to the parties or special events and comfortable shoes I will wear it when I go to school or go to play some things like badminton or football.
✓ I will wear fashionable shoes when I go to parties or special events, and comfortable shoes when I go to school or play sports like badminton or football.
The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'fashionable shoes' and 'comfortable shoes' because the subject is already clear. Also, 'have go' is incorrect; it should be 'go'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.
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