Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, with some repetition and hesitation. Try to give a clear, direct response to the question, avoid repeating words, and complete your thoughts. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: I don't buy shoes very often because I already have enough pairs for my daily needs. I prefer to use what I have rather than buying new ones frequently.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and adding a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: Yes, I often try on shoes in physical stores first, and then I order them online because the prices are usually better. This way, I can save money while ensuring the shoes fit well.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'if a pair of shoes over 200' and 'expensive bread'. Try to use correct grammar and vocabulary, and clarify your points with specific reasons.

예시: I usually avoid spending more than 200 dollars on shoes because I don't think it's worth the high price. For me, comfort and practicality are more important than expensive brands.

제안: Your answer conveys your preference but includes hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes, especially since I have to work a lot each day. Comfortable shoes keep me happy and focused throughout the day, so comfort is the most important factor for me.

× Well, I would say not that often and I'm enjoying what I what I have and actually I only have a few shoes and I think it's totally enough for my daily use.

✓ Well, I would say not that often and I enjoy what I have and actually I only have a few shoes and I think it's totally enough for my daily use.

The phrase 'I'm enjoying' is present continuous, which is used for actions happening now or temporary situations. Here, the student is talking about a general state or preference, so the simple present 'I enjoy' is more appropriate.

× Umm, to be honest, I can't get why some people.

✓ Umm, to be honest, I can't understand why some people do that.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object after 'why some people'. Adding 'understand' and 'do that' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, actually I often try on shoes in physical store then order them online for better price.

✓ Yes, actually I often try on shoes in physical stores then order them online for a better price.

'Physical store' should be plural 'physical stores' to indicate any store, and 'better price' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually don't spend too much money on shoes if a pair of shoes over 200.

✓ I usually don't spend too much money on shoes if a pair of shoes costs over 200.

The phrase 'a pair of shoes over 200' is missing the verb 'costs' to indicate price. Also, 'pair' is singular, so the verb must agree.

× I tend to avoid buying it because I don't think it is worth such a high price.

✓ I tend to avoid buying them because I don't think they are worth such a high price.

'It' refers to 'a pair of shoes' but since the context is plural 'shoes', 'them' and 'they' are more appropriate to refer to shoes in general.

× For me, comfortable and practically are more important than expensive bread.

✓ For me, comfort and practicality are more important than expensive brand.

'Comfortable' and 'practically' are incorrect forms here; the nouns 'comfort' and 'practicality' should be used. Also, 'bread' is a typo for 'brand'.

× I definitely go with comfortable shoes, especially when I need work a lot per day and comfortable shoes can make me all day happy and then it's umm.

✓ I definitely go with comfortable shoes, especially when I need to work a lot per day and comfortable shoes can make me happy all day, and then it's umm.

The phrase 'I need work' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to work'. Also, 'make me all day happy' is awkward; 'make me happy all day' is the correct adverb placement.

× I. I think comfortable is most important.

✓ I think comfort is the most important.

'Comfortable' is an adjective; here, the noun 'comfort' is needed. Also, 'most important' requires the definite article 'the'.