Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is incomplete and does not address the question. You should provide a clear response about whether you like buying shoes and how often you do so. Try to form a complete sentence and add some details to make your answer natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair every few months to keep up with the latest styles.

제안: Your answer is too brief and does not provide any supporting details. To improve, give a full sentence and explain your experience or opinion about buying shoes online, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it is convenient and offers a wider selection than physical stores.

제안: Your answer does not address the question at all. You need to specify an amount or range of money you spend on shoes and possibly explain why. Use complete sentences and add details to enrich your response.

예시: I usually spend around $50 to $100 on a pair of shoes, depending on the brand and quality.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly answer the question. You should state your preference clearly and provide reasons or examples to support your choice, using linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk long distances, and comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× Just say.

✓ Yes, I do.

The student's response 'Just say.' is incomplete and does not answer the question. The examiner asked if the student likes buying shoes and how often. A proper response should be a complete sentence that addresses the question, such as 'Yes, I do.' or 'Yes, I like buying shoes.' To improve, the student should provide full sentences that directly answer the questions.

× Just say yes.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online.

The student's response 'Just say yes.' is not a proper answer to the question 'Have you ever bought shoes online?'. It is an instruction rather than an answer. The student should respond with a complete sentence that answers the question, such as 'Yes, I have bought shoes online.' This provides clarity and proper grammar.

× Just say yes.

✓ I usually spend about $50 on shoes.

The student's response 'Just say yes.' does not answer the question 'How much money do you usually spend on shoes?'. The student should provide a specific amount or range in a complete sentence. For example, 'I usually spend about $50 on shoes.' This improves clarity and relevance.

× Yeah, yeah, yeah.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

The response 'Yeah, yeah, yeah.' is informal and does not answer the question 'Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?'. The student should give a clear preference in a complete sentence, such as 'I prefer comfortable shoes.' This makes the answer appropriate and grammatically correct.