Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatical, concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., how often you buy shoes), then give one or two specific reasons. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Add a linking word to connect reason (for example, "because" or "so"). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I usually buy shoes about twice a year because I wear each pair until it is worn out. For example, I tend to use casual trainers for daily activities, so I only replace them when they become uncomfortable or damaged.

제안: Answer directly, then give a specific positive point and one brief example of a negative experience. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing, and use linking words (e.g., "however", "for example"). Limit to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient and I can compare many styles quickly. However, once I received a pair that did not match the measurements, so I could not wear them and had to return them.

제안: Give a clear estimate (a number or range) and explain briefly why you spend that amount. Use natural phrasing and avoid vague expressions. Use a linking word to connect reason (e.g., "because" or "so").

예시: I usually spend around $50 to $80 on a pair of shoes because I prefer practical, affordable brands and only buy new pairs about twice a year.

제안: Start with a clear preference, then add a short contrast with a linking word (e.g., "but" or "however") and a specific example of when you choose fashionable shoes. Keep it concise and correct small errors like word order and articles.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes for everyday use because I walk a lot. However, for special occasions like weddings or formal events, I like to wear fashionable shoes that match my outfit.

× I often buying shoes twice in a year because the shoes I wear I I use.

✓ I often buy shoes twice a year because the shoes I wear I use.

The verb 'buy' should be in base form after 'often' (adverb) to form a simple present (habit). Using 'buying' creates a wrong progressive form. Remove duplicate words and use 'a year' not 'in a year'. Suggestion: use simple present 'I often buy' and 'twice a year'.

× I wear it randomly and after after wasting a shoe fulfill after that I buy another.

✓ I wear them until they are worn out, and then I buy another pair.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word choice ('wasting a shoe fulfill'). Use plural pronoun 'them' for shoes and correct phrase 'worn out' to indicate unusable condition. Use conjunction 'and then' for sequence. Maintain simple present for habitual action.

× Yes, I I used to bought shoes online because it is very convenient and but uh, one time I find it difficult because I ordered a pair of shoes on my measurement, but I find it that it is not like that and for that reason I can't use that.

✓ Yes, I used to buy shoes online because it is very convenient, but one time I found it difficult because I ordered a pair based on my measurements and it did not fit, so I could not use them.

After 'used to' the verb must be in base form ('buy'), not past ('bought'). Also inconsistent tense: events in the past should use past tense verbs ('found', 'did not fit', 'could not'). Use plural/plural pronouns for 'shoes/them' and clearer phrasing 'based on my measurements' and 'did not fit'.

× There are a limited number of amount I have to spend on my shoes because I don't spend lot of money on shoes as I I change them twice in a year.

✓ There is a limited amount I can spend on shoes because I don't spend a lot of money on them since I change them twice a year.

Use 'There is' with uncountable 'amount'. 'Limited number' is for countable nouns; here 'amount' is correct with 'is'. Use 'a lot of' with 'money' and pronoun 'them' for shoes. 'Since' fits reason better than 'as'. Maintain present simple for habitual facts.

× I prefer comfortable shoes but when I am going any occasion or in a big program that time I love to wear fashionable shoes with my with matched with my dress.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes, but when I go to an occasion or a big event, I like to wear fashionable shoes that match my dress.

Use 'go to' an occasion/event (correct preposition). 'Program' is better as 'event'. Use 'match' rather than 'matched with', and remove redundant words. Use simple present for preferences and habitual actions.