Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and precise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give a brief reason or frequency detail. Avoid absolute words that sound unlikely (e.g. buying shoes every week is unusual) unless you explain why. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I do like buying shoes. I usually buy new pairs a few times a year because I enjoy collecting different styles, although I sometimes shop more often when there are sales.

제안: Respond clearly and politely, giving a short account of the experience. Use past simple for completed actions and provide a brief detail or result. Avoid vague phrasing like “it's been a scam with me”; instead explain what happened.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online once, but the experience was disappointing because the item never arrived and the seller stopped replying, so I asked my bank for a refund.

제안: Give a clear, grammatical answer with a natural currency format and a reason for the amount. Avoid redundant words like “almost” and repeated prepositions. Use linking words if you add a reason.

예시: I usually spend about $400 to $500 on a pair of designer shoes because I prefer high-quality brands that last longer.

제안: Answer the preference directly, then justify briefly. If you mention a brand as an example, make sure grammar is correct and linking words connect opinion and reason. Correct vocabulary (e.g., “shoes” not “shows”).

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes, but I also like them to look fashionable; for example, I often choose Nike Air Jordans because they combine style with good cushioning.

× Usually I buy shoes almost every week.

✓ I usually buy shoes almost every week.

Adverb placement: In English, the adverb 'usually' typically comes before the main verb (or after the auxiliary). Placing 'usually' at the start is acceptable for emphasis, but the student's original 'Usually I buy shoes almost every week.' is not wrong grammatically; however, more natural phrasing is 'I usually buy shoes almost every week.' Suggestion: put frequency adverbs before the main verb for a more natural sentence.

× Yeah I have bought online shoes and it's been a scam with me.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online and it was a scam for me.

Word order and passive/tense usage: 'bought online shoes' has incorrect word order; 'shoes online' is correct. Also 'it's been a scam with me' is awkward and incorrectly uses present perfect 'has been' for a past event; use simple past 'it was a scam for me.' Suggestion: place adverb 'online' after the object and use 'it was a scam for me' to describe a past experience.

× Almost around 400 to $500 around on my.

✓ I usually spend around $400 to $500.

Preposition and number formatting errors: 'around' is duplicated and 'on my' is incorrect. Also the amount should place the currency symbol before the number. Use 'spend around $400 to $500' or 'spend between $400 and $500.' Suggestion: remove redundant words and use correct preposition 'spend' with the amount.

× The most comfortable and the most fashionable shows are always Nike Air Jordan.

✓ The most comfortable and the most fashionable shoes are always Nike Air Jordan.

Spelling/word choice error: 'shows' is a misspelling of 'shoes.' Also the repeated 'the most' is acceptable for emphasis but could be simplified. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'shoes' and say 'The most comfortable and fashionable shoes are always Nike Air Jordan.' to sound more natural.