Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu thông tin. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (tần suất, lí do, hoàn cảnh) và dùng liên từ nếu cần. Trả lời nên tự nhiên, tránh chỉ nói “No”.

예시: I don’t really enjoy buying shoes often. I usually buy new shoes once or twice a year because I prefer comfortable, durable pairs that last a long time.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi (có thể là nói nhầm). Cần trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No) rồi giải thích kinh nghiệm mua hàng trực tuyến, ví dụ nền tảng, lý do, hoặc vấn đề gặp phải. Dùng một hoặc hai liên từ để làm mạch văn.

예시: No, I haven’t bought shoes online. I prefer trying shoes on in-store to check the fit, though I sometimes browse online to compare styles and prices.

제안: Thiếu thông tin cụ thể về số tiền và tần suất. Trả lời nên nêu con số hoặc khoảng giá, giải thích yếu tố ảnh hưởng (thương hiệu, mục đích sử dụng) và dùng linking words nếu cần để làm rõ ý.

예시: I usually spend around $50 to $100 on a pair of shoes, depending on whether they’re for daily wear or for sports. I’m willing to pay more for good quality and comfort.

제안: Trả lời quá ngắn, không trực tiếp nêu quan điểm. Nên chọn một trong hai và giải thích lý do cụ thể, có thể đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn để làm rõ lựa chọn. Dùng linking words để kết nối ý.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I walk a lot during the day. However, if I have a special event, I might choose a stylish pair for appearance.

× No.

✓ No, I don't.

The student responded with a single word 'No' which lacks a verb and does not form a complete answer to the question. This is a sentence structure error because it omits the auxiliary verb needed for a negative reply to a present simple question. Suggestion: use a full negative sentence matching the question's tense, e.g. 'No, I don't.' or 'No, I don't like buying shoes.'

× Nine No.

✓ No, I haven't.

'Nine No' is unintelligible and does not form a grammatical response. The examiner asked about experience using present perfect ('Have you ever bought...'), so the correct negative reply requires the auxiliary 'have' plus 'not' (contraction haven't). This is a sentence structure error and possibly a mispronunciation or transcription mistake. Suggestion: respond with 'No, I haven't.' or 'No, I have never bought shoes online.'

× Spend on shoes, no.

✓ I don't usually spend much on shoes.

The original fragment lacks a subject and proper verb form; it's an incomplete sentence (sentence structure error). The question uses present simple about habitual spending, so the reply should use present simple negative or affirmative with subject. Suggestion: include subject and verb: 'I usually spend about $50 on shoes.' or 'I don't usually spend much on shoes.'

× No.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

A one-word 'No' does not answer the forced-choice question 'Which do you prefer...?' It lacks subject and predicate and thus is a sentence structure error. The student should state a clear preference using a complete sentence: 'I prefer comfortable shoes.' or 'I prefer fashionable shoes.'

× No.

✓ No, I don't.

When asked 'Do you like buying shoes? How often?' the short answer 'No.' is grammatically acceptable but very short; however to be clear and complete, 'No, I don't.' is better because it includes the auxiliary verb matching the present simple question. This addresses sentence structure by providing subject and auxiliary. Suggestion: use full negative response and optionally add frequency information: 'No, I don't. I rarely buy shoes.'