Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
No, not really. I'm not very interested in them. I only buy them when the old ones are broken. I usually prefer spending money on my clothes.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
No, I've never bought shoes online because I'm not sure if the size will fit me. I also worry about the return policy and whether the quality will match the pictures, so I prefer buying shoes in the store.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend more than ¥10,000 on shirts because I think the quality of shoes is important and expensive shoes tend to be high quality.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I flew for fashionable shoes because I usually care about my outfit and I like to coordinate my shoes with my clothes. For example, for special occasions like weddings or parties, I usually choose the stylish 1.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 74.0제안: 答えは直接的で明確ですが、いくつかの点で改善できます。まず、トピック文（好きかどうか）に対して一文で明確に答え、その後に頻度や理由を簡潔に述べると自然です。また、文の繋がりを示す接続詞（for example, becauseなど）を使い、具体的な頻度の表現（once a year, every two years など）を加えると良いでしょう。語彙は適切ですが「spending money on my clothes」は「spending more on clothes」といった自然な表現に改めるとさらに良くなります。
예시: Not really — I don’t buy shoes often. I only replace them when they wear out, so I usually buy shoes once every one or two years because I prefer to spend more on clothes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 86.0제안: 回答は明確で理由も具体的に述べられており、説得力があります。ただし、文の流れを良くするために接続表現（for that reason, additionally など）を少し整理するとさらに自然です。また、代替案（例えば、I might try online stores with free returns）を一文加えると会話が広がります。語彙や文法は比較的良好です。
예시: No, I’ve never bought shoes online because I’m not confident about the sizing. For that reason, I prefer buying shoes in-store where I can try them on, although I might consider online shops that offer free returns.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: この回答には内容の不一致と混乱があります（質問は“shoes”なのに“shirts”と答えている）。まず質問に直接答え、明確な金額と頻度（per pair / per year）を述べましょう。理由を述べる際は一貫性を保ち、具体例（what qualities you expect for the price）を加えると良いです。文は短く区切り、接続語で論理をつなげてください。
예시: I usually spend around ¥10,000 to ¥15,000 on a pair of shoes because I value durability and comfort. For example, I look for good leather and a supportive sole that will last several years.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 52.0제안: 回答に誤字（"flew" や末尾の不完全な文）があり、意味が不明瞭な箇所があります。まずは質問に対して明確なトピック文（I prefer fashionable shoes / I prefer comfortable shoes）を一文で述べ、その後理由と具体例を1〜2文で補強してください。特に語彙を正確に使い（prefer, prefer wearing など）、文を完結にすることが重要です。接続語（for example, especially）を使うと自然です。
예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because I like to coordinate them with my outfits. For special occasions like weddings or parties, I usually choose stylish shoes, but for everyday use I sometimes pick more comfortable options.
문법
× I only buy them when the old ones are broken.
✓ I only buy them when the old ones are broken.
No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. 'Broken' is the correct past participle used adjectivally to describe the shoes.
× I usually prefer spending money on my clothes.
✓ I usually prefer to spend money on my clothes.
Use 'prefer to + base verb' or 'prefer + -ing'. Both are possible, but when contrasting preferences for actions it's more natural to use 'prefer to spend'. Change improves register and parallelism.
× No, I've never bought shoes online because I'm not sure if the size will fit me.
✓ No, I've never bought shoes online because I'm not sure if the size would fit me.
The original mixes present perfect with future 'will' about hypothetical fit; 'would' is more appropriate for hypothetical conditional situations after 'never bought' or 'if I bought'. This improves modality accuracy. (Maps to modal verb usage but kept as suggestion.)
× I also worry about the return policy and whether the quality will match the pictures, so I prefer buying shoes in the store.
✓ I also worry about the return policy and whether the quality will match the pictures, so I prefer to buy shoes in the store.
As above, use 'prefer to buy' for actions; 'prefer + -ing' is possible but keeping consistent with earlier correction 'prefer to spend' improves style and parallelism.
× I usually spend more than ¥10,000 on shirts because I think the quality of shoes is important and expensive shoes tend to be high quality.
✓ I usually spend more than ¥10,000 on shoes because I think the quality of shoes is important and expensive shoes tend to be high quality.
The student says 'on shirts' but context asks about shoes; this is likely a word choice error. Changing to 'shoes' fixes inconsistency. Also plural forms are correct.
× I flew for fashionable shoes because I usually care about my outfit and I like to coordinate my shoes with my clothes.
✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I usually care about my outfit and I like to coordinate my shoes with my clothes.
'Flew' is incorrect verb choice (past tense of 'fly'). The intended verb is 'prefer'. Replace with 'prefer' to match present preference and correct verb form.
× For example, for special occasions like weddings or parties, I usually choose the stylish 1.
✓ For example, for special occasions like weddings or parties, I usually choose stylish ones.
'Stylish 1' appears to be a typo. Use 'stylish ones' to refer back to 'shoes'. Also ensure plural agreement with 'occasions' and 'ones'.
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