Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Umm, I really like the bike shoe because it's very convenient and comfortable. I usually or I usually bring it when I go out and I usually buy so umm when I go out.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
MMM yes I have. I usually bought food online because it's very convenient and more cheap. I usually but but however, however, sometimes sometimes it's very it's very inconvenient.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Umm, in my opinion, I not spend too much money for buy shoes because it's not important. So I think I will spend money for the important things. The others, uh, the other things.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
To be honest, I usually, uh, I prepare the, uh, comfortable shoes because, umm, I always, always want to be comfort comforts and it's very convenient for go to school or go to work. So I think I.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và đúng trọng tâm. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (có hoặc không thích mua giày và tần suất), tránh lặp từ, giảm tiếng ngập ngừng và cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại giày, tần suất như 'once a month'). Nên dùng liên từ (because, so, and) để kết nối ý.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially casual trainers, because they are comfortable for daily use. I usually buy new pairs about once every three months when my old ones wear out.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 40.0제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi (về mua giày online) thay vì nói về mua thực phẩm. Tránh lặp từ và mâu thuẫn không cần thiết. Nên nêu rõ trải nghiệm, lợi và hại với ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: kích cỡ không vừa, giao hàng chậm) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is convenient and often cheaper, but sometimes the size does not fit or the delivery is delayed, so I check return policies before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: Cải thiện: Cần trả lời cụ thể về số tiền hoặc phạm vi chi tiêu (ví dụ: around $30-50 or 500,000 VND), sau đó giải thích lý do. Tránh câu vòng và thiếu chủ ngữ/động từ đúng. Dùng liên từ để giải thích quan điểm và đưa ví dụ thực tế.
예시: I usually spend around $30 to $50 on a pair of shoes because I prefer to save money for essentials like bills and food. If I need special shoes for work or sports, I might spend more.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần rút gọn, tránh lặp và hoàn thiện câu kết. Nên giải thích vì sao thoải mái quan trọng và có thể so sánh ngắn với giày thời trang. Dùng linking words như 'because' và 'for example'.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk or commute to work and school. For example, I usually choose cushioned trainers over fashionable shoes since they prevent foot pain during long days.
문법
× I really like the bike shoe because it's very convenient and comfortable.
✓ I really like the bicycle shoes because they're very convenient and comfortable.
The student used 'bike shoe' which is awkward; plural 'shoes' matches general preference (singular/plural and natural usage). Use of contraction 'they're' fits plural. Suggest using 'bicycle shoes' or 'sneakers' for natural phrasing.
× I usually or I usually bring it when I go out and I usually buy so umm when I go out.
✓ I usually wear them when I go out, and I often buy them when I need new ones.
The verb 'bring' is incorrect for wearing shoes; 'wear' is the correct verb. Use plural pronoun 'them' to agree with 'shoes' (pronoun agreement). Reduce repetition for clarity and use 'often' or 'when I need new ones' to express frequency.
× MMM yes I have. I usually bought food online because it's very convenient and more cheap.
✓ Yes, I have. I usually buy food online because it's very convenient and cheaper.
The student mixed present perfect 'I have' with simple past 'I usually bought' which is inconsistent. For habitual actions use simple present 'I usually buy'. 'More cheap' is incorrect comparative; use 'cheaper'.
× I usually but but however, however, sometimes sometimes it's very it's very inconvenient.
✓ However, sometimes it can be very inconvenient.
Repeated words and fillers create redundancy. Use a single discourse marker 'however' and simplify to 'sometimes it can be very inconvenient' for grammatical and natural structure.
× Umm, in my opinion, I not spend too much money for buy shoes because it's not important.
✓ In my opinion, I don't spend too much money on buying shoes because it's not important.
Negative form missing auxiliary 'do' in present simple: use 'I don't spend'. Preposition 'on' is required with 'spend money on'. Use 'buying shoes' (gerund) after preposition.
× So I think I will spend money for the important things.
✓ So I think I will spend money on important things.
Use 'spend money on' not 'for'. Omit the definite article 'the' before 'important things' when speaking generally.
× The others, uh, the other things.
✓ On other things.
Fragmentary repetition; convert to a full phrase 'on other things' to complete the idea and follow 'spend money on'.
× To be honest, I usually, uh, I prepare the, uh, comfortable shoes because, umm, I always, always want to be comfort comforts and it's very convenient for go to school or go to work.
✓ To be honest, I usually choose comfortable shoes because I always want to be comfortable and they're very convenient for going to school or work.
'Prepare the comfortable shoes' is unnatural; use 'choose' or 'wear'. 'Want to be comfort comforts' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'comfortable' after 'want to be'. 'For go to school' needs gerund: 'for going to school'. Use plural pronoun 'they're' for 'shoes'.
× So I think I.
✓ So I think I prefer comfort over fashion.
The original is an incomplete sentence fragment. Provide a complete opinion matching the question about preference: 'I prefer comfort over fashion.' This fits the conversational context and completes the thought.
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