Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state the rules at your school using simple, correct sentences. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use mobile phones during class. Also, we must follow classroom discipline, such as not talking when the teacher is speaking and not sleeping during lessons.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: I think it depends on the students' self-awareness. If students can control themselves, more rules might limit their self-expression. However, for students who lack discipline, additional rules could help them focus better.

제안: Your answer is brief and contains a grammatical error. Try to provide more details about why you think your teacher does a good job, using correct grammar and linking words.

예시: Yes, I have a Chinese teacher who does his job very well. He is strict but responsible, which helps us learn effectively. Moreover, he always explains difficult topics clearly, so I enjoy his classes.

× Is there many room for student in my school like forbidding taking a mobile and follow like discipline in the classroom you can talk, you cannot talking and you cannot sleeping the only thing.

✓ Are there many rooms for students in my school, like forbidding taking a mobile and following discipline in the classroom: you can talk, you cannot talk, and you cannot sleep; that's the only thing.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is there' with the plural noun 'many room' which should be 'Are there many rooms' to agree in number (plural). Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. Correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× Is there many room for student in my school like forbidding taking a mobile and follow like discipline in the classroom you can talk, you cannot talking and you cannot sleeping the only thing.

✓ Are there many rooms for students in my school, like forbidding taking a mobile and following discipline in the classroom: you can talk, you cannot talk, and you cannot sleep; that's the only thing.

The phrase 'forbidding taking a mobile and follow like discipline' misuses verb forms. After 'forbidding', the gerund form 'taking' is correct, but 'follow' should be 'following' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form after prepositions.

× Is there many room for student in my school like forbidding taking a mobile and follow like discipline in the classroom you can talk, you cannot talking and you cannot sleeping the only thing.

✓ Are there many rooms for students in my school, like forbidding taking a mobile and following discipline in the classroom: you can talk, you cannot talk, and you cannot sleep; that's the only thing.

The phrases 'you cannot talking' and 'you cannot sleeping' incorrectly use the '-ing' form after 'cannot'. After modal verbs like 'cannot', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'talking' and 'sleeping' should be 'talk' and 'sleep' respectively.

× So I think it is depends whether student have self-awareness or not. Because if if a student was can control himself I think the rule will restrict their self-expression like.

✓ So I think it depends on whether students have self-awareness or not. Because if a student can control himself, I think the rule will restrict their self-expression.

The phrase 'it is depends' is incorrect; 'depends' is a verb and does not need 'is'. Also, 'student have' should be 'students have' to agree in number. The phrase 'if a student was can control' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if a student can control'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and verb usage.

× So I think it is depends whether student have self-awareness or not. Because if if a student was can control himself I think the rule will restrict their self-expression like.

✓ So I think it depends on whether students have self-awareness or not. Because if a student can control himself, I think the rule will restrict their self-expression.

The phrase 'if a student was can control' incorrectly mixes past tense 'was' with modal 'can'. The correct form is 'if a student can control' to express ability in present/future context.

× Yeah, actually I have my Chinese teacher and he's very stricted and responsible.

✓ Yeah, actually I have my Chinese teacher and he's very strict and responsible.

The word 'stricted' is not a correct adjective form. The correct adjective is 'strict'. Using 'stricted' is a common error where the past tense form is mistakenly used as an adjective.