Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary words like 'Laura's at the Academy' which is confusing here, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, provide specific examples and complete sentences to improve clarity.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, teachers do not allow students to use social media or play games during class because these activities reduce our concentration.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to explain your reasons, and avoid redundancy. Also, be specific about how more rules can benefit students.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because stricter regulations can help them avoid distractions. For instance, when students know there are consequences, they tend to be more disciplined and focused on their studies.

제안: Your answer has good content but some grammatical mistakes and unclear pronoun references. Use a clear topic sentence, correct pronouns, and linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid mixing tenses and ensure subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, last year I had a math teacher who did her job very well. Although I was not very interested in mathematics before, her interesting lessons helped me understand the topics better and improved my skills significantly.

× For example, teachers.

✓ For example, there are rules about teachers.

The original sentence 'For example, teachers.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence without a verb (Grammar problem type ID 23). To correct it, a verb phrase is added to complete the sentence and clarify the meaning.

× They restrict us from scrolling through social media and playing games because will be less concentrated when we do so.

✓ They restrict us from scrolling through social media and playing games because we will be less concentrated when we do so.

The original sentence misses the subject 'we' before the modal verb 'will', which is necessary for correct sentence structure and clarity. Modal verbs require a subject before them (Grammar problem type ID 4).

× I think learners, they of course will get more advantage when their rules.

✓ I think learners, of course, will get more advantages with their rules.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they' redundantly and 'advantage' should be plural 'advantages' to match the context. Also, 'when their rules' is unclear and should be 'with their rules' to indicate possession or association (Grammar problem types ID 12 and 14).

× Students will have less chance to break the rules because they want to avoid the punishment so that they can be more disciplined.

✓ Students will have less chance to break the rules because they want to avoid punishment so that they can be more disciplined.

The article 'the' before 'punishment' is unnecessary here because 'punishment' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' corrects the article usage (Grammar problem type ID 22).

× Yes, last year. I have a math teacher, although I don't really get into mathematics, her lessons are really interesting which improve my mathematics a lot because he made me understand the topics really well.

✓ Yes, last year, I had a math teacher. Although I didn't really get into mathematics, her lessons were really interesting, which improved my mathematics a lot because she made me understand the topics really well.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the time reference is 'last year', past tense should be used consistently: 'have' to 'had', 'don't' to 'didn't', 'are' to 'were', 'improve' to 'improved', and 'he' to 'she' to match the teacher's gender. This corrects the past tense issue (Grammar problem type ID 5) and pronoun error (ID 12).