Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, we must attend classes on time and keep the campus clean. These rules help maintain a good learning environment.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc tốt hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because these rules create a better learning environment. For instance, rules about punctuality and behavior help students focus and learn effectively.

제안: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về giáo viên và cách họ giúp bạn học tập.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is an English teacher and taught me many useful lessons in secondary school. Her teaching helped me improve my language skills significantly.

× I currently am a senior students at University of Economic Law so that there are a lot of rules for students to obey that also can keep the environment more.

✓ I currently am a senior student at the University of Economic Law, so there are a lot of rules for students to obey that also help keep the environment better.

The word 'students' should be singular 'student' because 'senior' refers to one person. Also, 'University of Economic Law' needs the definite article 'the' before it. The phrase 'that also can keep the environment more' is awkward; it should be 'that also help keep the environment better' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× Yes, I think the student can gain many, but many benefit from more rules because the rules can create a better learning environment that that helps students can abide and have some good.

✓ Yes, I think students can gain many benefits from more rules because the rules can create a better learning environment that helps students abide by them and have some good outcomes.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Many' should be followed by a noun, so 'many benefits' is correct. The phrase 'that that helps students can abide and have some good' is incorrect; it should be 'that helps students abide by them and have some good outcomes' for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I have a good teacher that see very well.

✓ Yes, I have a good teacher who teaches very well.

The verb 'see' is incorrect here; it should be 'teaches' to describe the teacher's action. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'who' when referring to people. The verb must agree with the third person singular subject 'teacher', so 'teaches' is correct.

× She is a profession in English.

✓ She is a professional in English.

The word 'profession' is a noun meaning a type of job, but here the adjective 'professional' is needed to describe the teacher. Therefore, 'She is a professional in English' is correct.

× She teach me a lot and I can learn from her more lessons when she teach me in secondary school.

✓ She teaches me a lot and I can learn more lessons from her when she taught me in secondary school.

The verb 'teach' must be in third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with 'she'. Also, the second clause refers to past time, so 'teach' should be in past tense 'taught'. The word order is improved for clarity: 'learn more lessons from her'.