Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, use 'students' instead of 'student', and avoid repeating 'this is a good rules' multiple times. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring their phones to school because it helps them focus better on their studies without distractions from games or social media.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use correct plural forms and complete your examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your ideas clearly.

예시: No, I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because too many rules can make them feel stressed and distracted. For example, some schools have strict dress codes that make students uncomfortable, which affects their concentration.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and plural forms. Try to link your ideas smoothly using words like 'because' and 'as a result'. Also, be more specific about what made the teacher dedicated and how it helped you.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher who gave us many practice exercises and printed out past exam questions. Because of her support, I was able to understand the exam format better and got an A in my physics paper.

제안: Correct your vocabulary and grammar, for example, use 'fewer rules' instead of 'fever roofs'. Make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your opinion logically.

예시: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because some rules are unnecessary and only cause pressure for students without helping them.

× Yes, they have many rules for student at my school.

✓ Yes, they have many rules for students at my school.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to more than one student in the school.

× So I think this is a good rules so we can let student more focus on their study and she will not playing her phone, playing online game.

✓ So I think these are good rules so we can let students focus more on their studies and they will not play on their phones or play online games.

'Rules' is plural, so 'this is a good rules' should be 'these are good rules'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Focus' should be followed by 'more' in correct order. 'She will not playing' is incorrect; it should be 'they will not play'. Also, 'playing online game' should be plural 'play online games'.

× So this is a good rules for students to focus on their study.

✓ So these are good rules for students to focus on their studies.

'Rules' is plural, so 'a good rules' is incorrect; it should be 'these are good rules'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to academic work in general.

× No, adding student would not benefit more from more rules because more rules make students feel so they cannot focus on their study.

✓ No, adding more rules would not benefit students because more rules make students feel they cannot focus on their studies.

'Adding student' is incorrect; it should be 'adding more rules'. 'Students' should be plural. 'Their study' should be 'their studies'.

× For example, some school got a rules like they cannot wear T-shirt so big a student will feel hot so they.

✓ For example, some schools have rules like they cannot wear T-shirts, so students will feel hot.

'Some school' should be plural 'some schools'. 'Got a rules' is incorrect; it should be 'have rules'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. 'Big a student' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'students'. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× She's very good. She give me many practice and she print out many passive questions for us so we can more understand how the essence paper question will come out.

✓ She's very good. She gave me much practice and she printed out many past questions for us so we could better understand how the exam questions would come out.

The verbs 'give' and 'print' should be in past tense 'gave' and 'printed' to match the past context. 'Many practice' should be 'much practice' as 'practice' is uncountable. 'Passive questions' is likely a mistake for 'past questions'. 'Can more understand' is incorrect; it should be 'could better understand'. 'Essence paper question' is unclear and replaced with 'exam questions'.

× So as a result I also get a A in my physics paper.

✓ So as a result, I also got an A in my physics paper.

'Get' should be past tense 'got' to match the past context. 'A A' is incorrect; it should be 'an A' because 'A' starts with a vowel sound.

× I prefer to have fever roofs at school because some school have a rules that is not really important, so I think it give many student pressure but it didn't useful for students.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because some schools have rules that are not really important, so I think they give many students pressure but are not useful for students.

'Fever roofs' is incorrect; it should be 'fewer rules'. 'Some school' should be plural 'some schools'. 'Have a rules' is incorrect; it should be 'have rules'. 'That is' should be 'that are' to agree with plural 'rules'. 'It give' should be 'they give' to agree with plural subject. 'Many student' should be 'many students'. 'It didn't useful' is incorrect; it should be 'are not useful'.