Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“there are variety of rules”应为“there are a variety of rules”。建议注意冠词的使用，并使句子更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, there are a variety of rules at my school. For example, students must wear the school uniform every day, and every Monday we sing the national anthem together.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意主谓一致和代词使用。

예시: Yes, I think more rules would help because students are young and often lack self-discipline. For example, many students bring phones to school and use them to look up homework answers, which shows they can't control themselves well. Therefore, rules can help manage this behavior.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“she check everyone the notebook”应为“she checks everyone's notebook”。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，并使表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I have. My geography teacher, Miss Young, is very dedicated. She is strict but friendly. For example, during lessons, she checks everyone's notebook one by one and also teaches us about our rights.

제안: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“roles”应为“rules”，且表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，并用更完整的句子表达观点。

예시: I think the current number of rules is enough. I don't want more rules at school because I believe we already have enough discipline to control ourselves.

× Yes, of course there are variety of rules in my schools.

✓ Yes, of course there are a variety of rules in my school.

这里的“variety”前面需要加冠词“a”，表示“一些”，而且“schools”应为单数“school”，因为指的是学生所在的学校。

× every Monday student need to sing national songs together.

✓ every Monday students need to sing national songs together.

“student”应为复数形式“students”，因为指的是每周一所有学生。

× the students are very young and they are lack of self-discipline.

✓ the students are very young and they lack self-discipline.

“lack”是动词，主语是复数“they”，不需要“are”。

× many people bring phones to the school, they search the homework online.

✓ many people bring phones to the school, they search for the homework online.

“search”后面需要加介词“for”，表示“搜索”。

× It can't control themselves very well.

✓ They can't control themselves very well.

“It”指代不明确，应改为“they”指代前面的“many people”；“themselves”是反身代词，指代复数主语“they”。

× when we have a lessons she check everyone the notebook 1 by 1 and she also teach us about our ride.

✓ when we have lessons she checks everyone's notebook one by one and she also teaches us about our rights.

“lessons”应为复数；动词“check”和“teach”需加第三人称单数形式“checks”和“teaches”；“everyone the notebook”应改为“everyone's notebook”；“1 by 1”用“one by one”更正式；“ride”应为“rights”，可能是拼写错误。

× I don't want to get more roles in the school.

✓ I don't want to get more rules in the school.

“roles”应为“rules”，意思是“规则”，这里是拼写错误。