Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to litter and must help keep the classrooms clean. These rules help maintain a green and tidy environment, which is beneficial for everyone.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa và tiếng ồ ạt như "uh". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách trực tiếp và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help students understand what is expected of them and encourage good behavior at school.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu nội dung cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do và cung cấp ví dụ nếu có thể. Tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và nói lắp.

예시: No, I have not had a really dedicated teacher yet. I find it challenging to keep up with some subjects, but I try to study hard and do experiments to improve my understanding.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do cụ thể, tránh nói lắp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

예시: I prefer to have more rules at school because they ensure students' safety and help keep the environment clean and green.

× Yes in class it has many of rule like don't litter the rubbish or cleaning the floor.

✓ Yes, in class there are many rules like don't litter the rubbish or clean the floor.

The phrase 'many of rule' is incorrect because 'rule' is countable and should be pluralized as 'rules' when used with 'many'. Also, 'there are' is needed to indicate existence of multiple rules. Additionally, 'cleaning the floor' should be 'clean the floor' to match the imperative form used in rules.

× It's make the environment more green.

✓ It makes the environment greener.

The subject 'It' requires the verb to be in third person singular form, so 'make' should be 'makes'. Also, 'more green' is better expressed as the comparative adjective 'greener'.

× Entertain a tidy.

✓ It helps keep the environment tidy.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Entertain a tidy' is not a correct phrase. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning that the rules help maintain tidiness.

× Uh yes, I think few students would will benefit more from rule because uh, it's uh forced to uh, student uh to learn about the rule in school, uh, and student uh my accept it.

✓ Uh yes, I think a few students would benefit more from rules because they are forced to learn about the rules in school, and students may accept them.

The phrase 'few students' implies almost none, but 'a few students' is more appropriate to indicate some students. 'Would will' is redundant; only one modal verb is needed. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the verb. 'My accept' is incorrect; it should be 'may accept'.

× No, I don't have a dedicated teacher, uh, because, uh, it's so difficult to me.

✓ No, I don't have a dedicated teacher because it is so difficult for me.

The phrase 'difficult to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when expressing difficulty experienced by someone.

× Uh, I can, I might, I might study a lot and uh, take a lot of experiment.

✓ I can, I might study a lot and do many experiments.

The phrase 'take a lot of experiment' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'do many experiments'. Also, the repetition of 'I might' is unnecessary.

× I have more rule in school, it is uh ensure safety for student UH and have the environment to uh clean green and clean UMM.

✓ I have more rules in school; it ensures safety for students and helps keep the environment clean and green.

'More rule' should be 'more rules' to be plural. 'It is ensure' is incorrect; it should be 'it ensures'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. The phrase 'have the environment to clean green and clean' is awkward; 'helps keep the environment clean and green' is clearer.