Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is concise and directly addresses the question. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school that help students stay focused and behave properly during school hours. For example, students must arrive on time and avoid using phones in class, which helps them concentrate better on their studies.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words like 'for example' properly and avoid awkward phrasing. Try to be more specific and concise in your explanation.

예시: Yes, I think students benefit from having clear rules. For example, attending classes regularly and completing assignments on time helps students achieve better academic results and become more productive.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to use simple sentences and correct vocabulary. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer fully addresses the question with specific details.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher called Mrs Anne. She was passionate about teaching, which made the class enjoy the subject and helped us all achieve excellent results.

제안: Your answer needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your ideas fully. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific examples.

예시: I prefer having a few strong rules at school because it is easier to follow them. For example, the rule that requires us to complete and submit assignments on time helps me stay organised and focused on my studies.

× Yes, there are regulation that the students abides in the school that help them save, focus and be minded of the things that they do in premises and through school hour.

✓ Yes, there are regulations that the students abide by in the school that help them save, focus and be mindful of the things that they do on the premises and during school hours.

The word 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to agree with 'are'. 'Abides' should be 'abide' to agree with plural subject 'students'. 'Be minded' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be mindful'. 'In premises' should be 'on the premises' and 'through school hour' should be 'during school hours' for correct preposition use and plural form.

× Yes, there are regulation that the students abides in the school that help them save, focus and be minded of the things that they do in premises and through school hour.

✓ Yes, there are regulations that the students abide by in the school that help them save, focus and be mindful of the things that they do on the premises and during school hours.

The verb 'abides' is incorrectly used with the plural subject 'students'. It should be 'abide' to match the plural subject.

× Yes, there are regulation that the students abides in the school that help them save, focus and be minded of the things that they do in premises and through school hour.

✓ Yes, there are regulations that the students abide by in the school that help them save, focus and be mindful of the things that they do on the premises and during school hours.

The preposition 'in' should be 'by' after 'abide'. 'In premises' should be 'on the premises'. 'Through school hour' should be 'during school hours' to correctly express time and place.

× This help them to focus on their academic more effectively.

✓ This helps them to focus on their academics more effectively.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'This'. 'Academic' should be plural 'academics' to refer to studies in general.

× I believe when students abide on this rule, it will help them in their education.

✓ I believe when students abide by this rule, it will help them in their education.

'Abide on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'abide by'. This is a fixed prepositional phrase.

× For example, when they keeps the rule of attending class every day and during their assignments duties to help them in their academic to come out with a flying colors and be productive.

✓ For example, when they keep the rule of attending class every day and completing their assignment duties, it helps them in their academics to come out with flying colours and be productive.

'Keeps' should be 'keep' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Assignments duties' is awkward; 'completing their assignment duties' is clearer. 'Academic' should be plural 'academics'. 'A flying colors' should be 'flying colours' (British English) without 'a'.

× I believe when students abide on this rule, it will help them in their education.

✓ I believe when students abide by this rule, it will help them in their education.

'Abide on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by' after 'abide'.

× Yes, dream my gesture Mrs. Anne, she was quite delicated to her teaching to us.

✓ Yes, my dear teacher Mrs Anne, she was quite dedicated to her teaching to us.

'Dream my gesture' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'my dear teacher'. 'Delicated' is a misspelling of 'dedicated'.

× Yes, dream my gesture Mrs. Anne, she was quite delicated to her teaching to us.

✓ Yes, my dear teacher Mrs Anne, she was quite dedicated to her teaching us.

'Delicated' is a misspelling of 'dedicated'. Also, 'teaching to us' is better as 'teaching us'.

× This made everyone in the class to love the subject and everyone's come out with a flying colour in that result.

✓ This made everyone in the class love the subject and everyone come out with flying colours in the results.

The infinitive 'to love' is unnecessary after 'made'; use the base verb 'love'. 'Everyone's come out' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone come out'. 'A flying colour' should be 'flying colours'. 'That result' should be 'the results'.

× So these have.

✓ So these have.

This sentence is incomplete and unclear; it should be removed or completed for clarity.

× I prefer to have strong and few rules in school because this will help me to focus more on the regulation and abide more.

✓ I prefer to have strong and few rules in school because this will help me to focus more on the regulations and abide by them more.

'Regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to match 'rules'. 'Abide' usually requires the preposition 'by' and an object.

× I prefer to have strong and few rules in school because this will help me to focus more on the regulation and abide more.

✓ I prefer to have strong and few rules in school because this will help me to focus more on the regulations and abide by them more.

'Abide' requires the preposition 'by' and an object to be grammatically correct.

× For example, they made it compulsory to do our assignments and submit it before mandate.

✓ For example, they made it compulsory to do our assignments and submit them before the deadline.

'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'assignments'. 'Mandate' is incorrect in this context; 'deadline' is appropriate.

× For example, they made it compulsory to do our assignments and submit it before mandate.

✓ For example, they made it compulsory to do our assignments and submit them before the deadline.

'Mandate' is a noun but not used correctly here; 'the deadline' is the correct phrase with the definite article.