Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there any rules for students at your school?
수험생
Yes, yes, definitely. UH rules play an import, important role or even a pivotal role in a school. Definitely. Because it's really, yeah, without rules, there's no equity between UH students. So yeah, in just the example in my class, no rules is gonna be, like, really crazy.
시험관
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
수험생
Yes, I'm totally agree because here students with moral students have more chance to have equity in school, which is really important. They have the same opportunity to develop themselves. And yes, just like my school with rules, we I can have the same opportunity to develop as my rich friend.
시험관
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
수험생
Yes, I had a really dedicated teachers like 5 or 6 years ago. She, uh, she's really terrible. I think he always wants me to do whatever she want and even it's really stupid. I have to, uh, admit it because I have nothing to do. I have nothing to do because yeah, it's really, it's really.
시험관
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
수험생
I would like to say that I prefer having fewer rules in school because with fewer rules like we are not getting too strict. I don't want to be strict because it's really hard for student to develop themselves such as the rules of now wearing uniforms. I don't think uniform is too important because.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ lặp lại không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn.
예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must attend classes on time and respect teachers. These rules help maintain order and fairness among all students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
점수: 60.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nên dùng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.
예시: Yes, I totally agree because having more rules ensures fairness among students. For instance, rules prevent cheating and give everyone equal chances to succeed.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
점수: 40.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ tiêu cực không phù hợp và trình bày ý kiến một cách lịch sự, có cấu trúc rõ ràng.
예시: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher about five years ago. She was very strict but helped me improve a lot. Her teaching motivated me to work harder.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
점수: 50.0제안: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời với ý kiến rõ ràng và lý do cụ thể. Tránh để câu trả lời dang dở và sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn.
예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because it allows students to be more creative and independent. For example, I think wearing uniforms is unnecessary and limits personal expression.
문법
× UH rules play an import, important role or even a pivotal role in a school.
✓ Rules play an important or even a pivotal role in a school.
The phrase 'UH rules' is incorrect because 'UH' is unnecessary and 'import' is a typo. The correct quantifier is 'an important role'. The sentence should be clear and concise without unnecessary words.
× no rules is gonna be, like, really crazy.
✓ No rules are going to be really crazy.
The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech.
× Yes, I'm totally agree because here students with moral students have more chance to have equity in school, which is really important.
✓ Yes, I totally agree because students with good morals have a better chance to have equity in school, which is really important.
The phrase 'I'm totally agree' is incorrect because 'agree' is a verb and should not be used with 'am'. The correct form is 'I totally agree'. Also, 'students with moral students' is redundant and unclear; it should be 'students with good morals'.
× I had a really dedicated teachers like 5 or 6 years ago.
✓ I had a really dedicated teacher like 5 or 6 years ago.
The subject 'I' with 'had' refers to a singular teacher, so 'teachers' should be singular 'teacher'.
× She, uh, she's really terrible. I think he always wants me to do whatever she want and even it's really stupid.
✓ She, uh, she's really terrible. I think she always wants me to do whatever she wants and even it's really stupid.
The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'she'. Also, 'she want' should be 'she wants' to agree with third person singular.
× I have nothing to do because yeah, it's really, it's really.
✓ I have nothing to do because, yeah, it's really frustrating.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'frustrating' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.
× I would like to say that I prefer having fewer rules in school because with fewer rules like we are not getting too strict.
✓ I would like to say that I prefer having fewer rules in school because with fewer rules, we are not too strict.
The phrase 'we are not getting too strict' is awkward. 'We are not too strict' is clearer and more natural.
× I don't want to be strict because it's really hard for student to develop themselves such as the rules of now wearing uniforms.
✓ I don't want it to be strict because it's really hard for students to develop themselves, such as the rule of wearing uniforms now.
'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'themselves'. Also, 'rules of now wearing uniforms' is awkward; 'the rule of wearing uniforms now' is clearer.
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