Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "There were many disciplinary rules that students followed to encourage good behavior and develop good character."

예시: Yes, there were many rules at my school. Students had to follow them to behave properly and develop good character. These rules helped maintain discipline and respect among students.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to finish your thoughts and avoid filler words like "uh." Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why more rules might help students.

예시: Yes, I believe more rules can help students behave better because they provide clear guidelines. Moreover, rules encourage students to develop good character and responsibility.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words like "so" and "which" properly to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had many dedicated teachers at school. They were friendly and created a supportive environment, so students found it easier to communicate and get help with difficult subjects.

제안: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Avoid using words like "addicted" incorrectly. Try to explain your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer schools to have more rules because they help shape students' behavior and character. When students follow rules regularly, they develop good habits and discipline.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases like "incitement assigned." Try to explain clearly with correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I had strict teachers at my conservative school. They punished students who broke rules and were very strict about completing assignments on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has contradictory statements. Avoid hesitation and be clear about your opinion. Also, use correct words like "rule" instead of "role."

예시: Honestly, I am not interested in teaching. However, if there is a shortage of teachers, I would consider teaching regardless of whether the school has many rules or none.

× Well, to be honest, there used to be a lot of disciplinary rules which student used to regularly follow to behave good and it was also there to make a student importance of good behavior and make them person of good character.

✓ Well, to be honest, there used to be a lot of disciplinary rules which students used to regularly follow to behave well and it was also there to make students understand the importance of good behavior and make them persons of good character.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'rules' and the context. 'Behave good' is incorrect; it should be 'behave well' because 'well' is the adverb modifying the verb 'behave'. 'Make a student importance' is incorrect; it should be 'make students understand the importance' to convey the intended meaning. 'Make them person' should be 'make them persons' to agree in number with 'them'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and proper use of plural forms and adverbs.

× Obviously, I think it is very much important for our students to behave well so rules can make them, uh, mandatory to behave well and to show their character and develop their character without being.

✓ Obviously, I think it is very important for our students to behave well so rules can make it mandatory for them to behave well and to show and develop their character.

The phrase 'make them, uh, mandatory' is incorrect; it should be 'make it mandatory for them' to correctly use the modal verb structure. Also, 'develop their character without being' is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to 'show and develop their character' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's obviously I used to have a lot of dedicated teachers back in school. They were very friendly and cordial. They used to create a supportive environment for each and every students out there so that they will find easier to communicate with teachers and help and can take help in the difficult courses.

✓ It's obvious I used to have a lot of dedicated teachers back in school. They were very friendly and cordial. They used to create a supportive environment for each and every student out there so that they would find it easier to communicate with teachers and get help in the difficult courses.

'Each and every students' should be 'each and every student' because 'each and every' is followed by a singular noun. 'They will find easier' is incorrect; it should be 'they would find it easier' to match the past context and correct sentence structure. 'Help and can take help' is awkward; corrected to 'get help' for clarity and correctness.

× I think schools should have more and more rules to shape student behavior and character because students, if students are bonded to follow certain kind of rule, he or she will be addicted to it and will try to get, uh, follow those activities.

✓ I think schools should have more and more rules to shape student behavior and character because students, if they are bound to follow certain kinds of rules, will become accustomed to them and will try to follow those activities.

'Certain kind of rule' should be 'certain kinds of rules' to agree in number. 'Students are bonded' is incorrect; it should be 'students are bound' as 'bound' is the correct past participle of 'bind' in this context. 'He or she will be addicted to it' is awkward; 'will become accustomed to them' is more appropriate. These corrections address pluralization and verb usage.

× Yes, obviously I used to have a lot of strict teachers back then because our school used to be a very conservative school. So teachers used to beat us whenever we used to, uh, break any kind of rule of school. Besides that, they were very much stick in their courses to whenever, for example, whenever someone doesn't do any kind of incitement assigned by them.

✓ Yes, obviously I used to have a lot of strict teachers back then because our school used to be a very conservative school. So teachers used to beat us whenever we broke any kind of school rule. Besides that, they were very strict in their courses, for example, whenever someone didn't do any kind of assignment assigned by them.

'Break any kind of rule of school' is better as 'broke any kind of school rule' to correct tense and word order. 'They were very much stick' is incorrect; it should be 'they were very strict'. 'Doesn't do any kind of incitement' is incorrect; 'incitement' is wrong word here, it should be 'assignment'. Also, tense corrected to past 'didn't do'. These corrections fix tense, word choice, and pluralization.

× To be honest, I am. I'm not. I'm really not into teaching, but if I get a chance to teach in any kind of school where there is the shortage of teacher, I will certainly teach that. If either it's role free or role is strict, it doesn't care.

✓ To be honest, I am not really into teaching, but if I get a chance to teach in any kind of school where there is a shortage of teachers, I will certainly teach there. Whether it is rule-free or strict, it doesn't matter to me.

'I am. I'm not.' is contradictory and unclear; corrected to 'I am not really into teaching' for clarity. 'Shortage of teacher' should be 'shortage of teachers' to agree in number. 'I will certainly teach that' is awkward; 'teach there' is better. 'If either it's role free or role is strict, it doesn't care' is incorrect; corrected to 'Whether it is rule-free or strict, it doesn't matter to me' for correct pronoun use and clarity.