Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, avoid filler words like 'uh', and ensure correct grammar, for example, say 'we had to arrive at school on time' instead of 'we have to reach at the reach that time'.

예시: Yes, there were several rules at my school, such as wearing the proper uniform, not using mobile phones in the classroom, and arriving at school on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid filler words and finish your thoughts fully. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with your opinion, then explain why, and give examples.

예시: I believe that too many rules can be overwhelming for students. However, some important rules, such as obeying teachers and completing homework on time, are necessary to maintain discipline.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'works on the mild'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in high school. She always encouraged us to do our best and made sure we understood every subject clearly.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and filler words. Use clear and correct expressions, for example, 'quality matters more than quantity'. Also, avoid hesitation sounds to make your speech more fluent.

예시: As far as I am concerned, I prefer fewer rules at school, but they should be strictly enforced. Quality matters more than quantity when it comes to rules.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms, for example, 'students who did not take his lessons seriously'. Also, try to add a linking phrase to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in class 9. He used to punish students who did not take his lessons seriously.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. For example, use 'freedom' without 'a' and add reasons to support your opinion.

예시: Definitely, I would like to work at a school with no restrictions because it would give me freedom to teach confidently and creatively.

× such as wearing the proper uniform and do not use the mobile phones in the classroom.

✓ such as wearing the proper uniform and not using mobile phones in the classroom.

After 'such as', parallel structure is required. 'Wearing' is a gerund, so 'do not use' should be changed to 'not using' to maintain parallelism.

× we have to reach at the reach that time in school.

✓ we have to reach school at the right time.

The phrase 'reach at the reach that time in school' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at' before 'the right time', and 'reach school' is the correct verb-object structure.

× Actually, too many rules can be like working on, uh, thin eyes, uh, but there are some certain rules that are really important to follow like uh.

✓ Actually, too many rules can be like walking on thin ice, but there are certain rules that are really important to follow.

The phrase 'working on thin eyes' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'walking on thin ice'. Also, 'some certain' is redundant; 'certain' alone suffices.

× Like obey the teachers and completing the homework on time or However, if there were if there are excessive.

✓ Like obeying the teachers and completing the homework on time. However, if there are excessive rules...

The phrase should use gerunds for parallelism: 'obeying' and 'completing'. Also, 'or However' is incorrect; 'However' should start a new sentence.

× Yes, I have a really dedicated teacher when I was in high school, uh, she always, uh, encourage us to do better and she always works on the mild that we should learn every subject clearly.

✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I was in high school. She always encouraged us to do better and she always worked on the mind that we should learn every subject clearly.

Since the time is in the past ('when I was in high school'), past tense verbs 'had', 'encouraged', and 'worked' should be used. 'Mild' is likely a typo for 'mind'.

× As far as I am concerned, I would uh like to prefer fewer rules at the schools uh, but with stricter implementation on them.

✓ As far as I am concerned, I would prefer fewer rules at school, but with stricter implementation of them.

'Schools' should be singular 'school' when speaking generally. Also, 'prefer' does not need 'like' before it.

× However, quality, quantity matters then quantity.

✓ However, quality matters more than quantity.

The phrase is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'quality matters more than quantity'.

× He always used to give the punishment to those students who were not take his lesson seriously.

✓ He always used to give punishment to those students who did not take his lessons seriously.

After 'used to', the base form is used. 'Were not take' is incorrect; it should be 'did not take'. Also, 'punishment' is uncountable here, so 'the' is unnecessary.

× Definitely, I would like to work at a school where there are no restrictions as it gives me a freedom to do my job confidently without any hesitation.

✓ Definitely, I would like to work in a school where there are no restrictions as it gives me the freedom to do my job confidently without any hesitation.

The correct preposition is 'in' a school, not 'at'. Also, 'a freedom' is incorrect; 'freedom' is uncountable and should not have an article.