Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“readers”应为“rules”，“to restricted”应为“to restrict”。建议注意动词形式和词汇的准确使用，同时回答应更简洁自然，避免重复。

예시: Yes, there were many rules at my high school to regulate student behavior. For example, students were not allowed to talk during class or bring mobile phones to school.

제안: 回答中语法和单复数使用不准确，如“student”应为“students”，“that age”应为“that age are”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的理由。

예시: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students, especially primary school children, because they are immature and might engage in bad behavior without proper guidelines.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不当，如“responsibility teacher”应为“responsible teacher”，句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子表达感受。

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in primary school who held extra lessons after school for free, which I really appreciated.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误，如“more use”应为“more rules”，语法结构不够清晰。建议注意词汇拼写和句子结构，使表达更准确。

예시: Although I am not a student now, I prefer more rules at school because they help regulate student behavior and protect them from potential dangers.

제안: 回答中句子不完整且表达不清晰，如“and still. Not enough to demand her standard”不符合语法。建议使用完整句子并清楚表达观点。

예시: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in high school who repeatedly required us to redo homework until it met her high standards.

제안: 回答中语法和表达稍显生硬，如“teachers duty”应为“teacher's duty”，“teach the student”应为“teach students”。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

예시: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because it would be difficult to manage student behavior. A teacher's duty is not only to impart knowledge but also to guide students on what they should and shouldn't do.

× Well there were many readers in my high school to restricted the students behavior.

✓ Well, there were many rules in my high school to restrict the students' behavior.

这里'readers'应为'rules'，因为句意是说学校有很多规则，而不是读者。'students behavior'应为'students' behavior'，表示学生的行为，需加所有格。

× Well there were many readers in my high school to restricted the students behavior.

✓ Well, there were many rules in my high school to restrict the students' behavior.

'to restricted'是不正确的，'to'后面应接动词原形，故应为'to restrict'。

× Like you should not talk in the classroom and you should not take a mobile phone to the school.

✓ Like you should not talk in the classroom and you should not take a mobile phone to school.

'to the school'中'the'不必要，通常说'go to school'表示去学校。

× Well, I think so, especially the primary school student, because the student that age are immature.

✓ Well, I think so, especially the primary school students, because students that age are immature.

'student'应为复数'students'，因为指的是一类学生。

× Well, I think so, especially the primary school student, because the student that age are immature.

✓ Well, I think so, especially the primary school students, because students that age are immature.

主语复数时，谓语动词也应使用复数形式，'are'对应复数'students'。

× That could do some bad behaviors if there are no rules to restrict them.

✓ They could do some bad behavior if there are no rules to restrict them.

'behaviors'通常不可数，表示行为时用单数形式'behavior'。

× Yes, I have met a responsibility teacher in my primary school.

✓ Yes, I have met a responsible teacher in my primary school.

'responsibility'是名词，形容词应为'responsible'，表示有责任心的。

× She is very dedicated that she held the extra lessons after school and with no payment.

✓ She is very dedicated; she held extra lessons after school with no payment.

'that'连接词用法不当，应使用分号或连词'and'连接两个独立句子。

× She is very dedicated that she held the extra lessons after school and with no payment.

✓ She is very dedicated; she held extra lessons after school without payment.

'with no payment'表达不自然，改为'without payment'更合适。

× That makes me really appreciate.

✓ That makes me really appreciate her.

句子缺少宾语，'appreciate'后应有宾语。

× Well I am not a student now so I'd like to say I prefer to have more use at school because I think the more rules can restrict the students behaviors and protect them from the dangers.

✓ Well, I am not a student now, so I'd like to say I prefer to have more rules at school because I think more rules can restrict students' behavior and protect them from dangers.

'more use'应为'more rules'，'students behaviors'应为'students' behavior'，'the dangers'中'the'不必要。

× Well, I have had a really strict teacher in my high school.

✓ Well, I had a really strict teacher in my high school.

根据上下文，描述过去经历，使用一般过去时更合适。

× She is really demanding that the students do the homework again and again and still.

✓ She is really demanding; the students have to do the homework again and again.

'that'连接词用法不当，且句子不完整，改为两个句子更清晰。

× Not enough to demand her standard.

✓ It was still not enough to meet her standards.

句子结构不完整，缺主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× Well, I'd like to say no because to work in a real free school it is difficult to restrict the students behavior.

✓ Well, I'd like to say no because working in a rule-free school, it is difficult to restrict students' behavior.

'to work in a real free school'表达不自然，改为'working in a rule-free school'更合适，且'students behavior'应为'students' behavior'。

× Well, I'd like to say no because to work in a real free school it is difficult to restrict the students behavior.

✓ Well, I'd like to say no because working in a rule-free school, it is difficult to restrict students' behavior.

'real free school'应为'rule-free school'，表示无规则的学校。

× The teachers duty is not only to teach the knowledge, but also should teach the student what should do and what shouldn't.

✓ The teacher's duty is not only to teach knowledge, but also to teach students what they should and shouldn't do.

句子结构不完整，'not only... but also'后应保持平行结构，且'teachers duty'应为所有格'teacher's duty'。