Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, there are several rules for students at my college. For example, we must attend school on time, wear a uniform including an ID card and black shoes, and maintain punctuality throughout the day.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain your points logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid grammatical errors.

예시: No, I don't think students would benefit from more rules because too many rules can cause stress and tiredness. Therefore, focusing on teaching morals might help students behave better and follow existing rules more effectively.

제안: Improve your grammar by using correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide more specific details about why the teacher is dedicated.

예시: Yes, at my college, I have a teacher named Truvi Mangu Kya who is very dedicated. She teaches us step by step and explains each topic clearly, which helps us understand the lessons better.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer having rules at school because they help students learn discipline and respect. Moreover, rules create an organised environment that supports effective learning.

제안: Work on subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add more information and make your answer more fluent and natural.

예시: No, I have never had a really strict teacher. My previous teacher was humble, simple, and energetic. She always explained each topic clearly and in a simple way, which made learning easier.

제안: Clarify your ideas and correct grammar mistakes. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use more relevant vocabulary.

예시: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I am interested in jewellery design and currently work as a designer. Therefore, teaching is not my preferred career path.

× Yes, there are uh, many rules for students at my college, umm, like uh, attending uh, school on time.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my college, such as attending school on time.

The original sentence uses 'like' incorrectly to introduce examples. In formal English, 'such as' is preferred to introduce examples clearly and correctly.

× Uh, we are in uniform, I card and black shoes compulsory and being on uh, be on time.

✓ We have to wear uniforms, ID cards, and black shoes, and being on time is compulsory.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I card' instead of 'ID card' and has awkward phrasing. Also, 'we are in uniform' is incorrect; it should be 'we have to wear uniforms'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun and noun usage.

× No, I don't think so. Students would benefit more from morals because sometimes students get stressful and often feel tired because too many rules distract students and they avoid to follow our rules which make students bad behavior.

✓ No, I don't think so. Students would benefit more from morals because sometimes students get stressed and often feel tired. Too many rules distract students, and they avoid following our rules, which leads to bad behavior.

The phrase 'get stressful' is incorrect; it should be 'get stressed'. Also, 'avoid to follow' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoid following'. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for preposition and verb form usage.

× Yes at my college my teacher name is Truvi Mangu Kya.

✓ Yes, at my college, my teacher's name was Truvi Mangu Kya.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb tense should be past ('was'). Also, possessive form 'teacher's name' is needed for correctness.

× She always teach us step by step and explain one topic in clearly.

✓ She always teaches us step by step and explains each topic clearly.

For third person singular subjects, verbs require an 's' at the end ('teaches', 'explains'). Also, 'in clearly' is incorrect; 'clearly' alone is sufficient.

× I prefer favour rules at school because it helps a student to, uh, follow rules, uh and uh they often learn discipline, respect, and uh, other things.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because it helps students to follow rules, and they often learn discipline, respect, and other things.

The word 'favour' is incorrect here; the correct quantifier is 'fewer' when referring to countable nouns like 'rules'. Also, 'a student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement.

× No, I never had a really strict teacher. My old teacher is a very humble, simple and energetic.

✓ No, I have never had a really strict teacher. My old teacher was very humble, simple, and energetic.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Have never had' is present perfect for experience. Also, 'teacher is' should be 'teacher was' to maintain past reference. Commas are added for correct adjective listing.

× They always teach each topic clearly and explain and explain in a simple.

✓ He always taught each topic clearly and explained it simply.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect when referring to a singular teacher; 'He' or 'She' should be used. Also, repeated 'explain and explain' is redundant. 'In a simple' is incomplete; 'simply' is correct.

× No, I don't like to work as a teacher in the rural free school because I have an interest in a jewellery design and I am a work.

✓ No, I don't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I am interested in jewellery design and I am a worker.

The phrase 'rural free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'Have an interest in a jewellery design' is incorrect; 'am interested in jewellery design' is correct. 'I am a work' is incorrect; 'I am a worker' is correct.

× I am a worker in a designer, so I don't like to work as a teacher.

✓ I am a worker in design, so I don't like to work as a teacher.

The phrase 'worker in a designer' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'worker in design' or 'designer'. The sentence is corrected for proper noun usage.