Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, during my school days, there were many rules that students had to follow. For example, we had to maintain discipline in class, wear proper uniforms, and pay attention during assemblies.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words like 'moreover' and use linking words appropriately. Try to express your points clearly and concisely.

예시: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because following them helps create a disciplined life. As a result, students stay focused on their work and become more productive.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and hesitations. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Also, try to provide more specific examples to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I remember one of my favorite teachers was my Hindi teacher. She was very dedicated and taught us everything thoroughly, even the small details. I learned a lot from her.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to finish your sentences and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases like 'do each thing on a showing time'.

예시: From my perspective, schools should have more rules because students learn about different types of rules during their school days. These rules help them develop discipline and manage their time effectively.

제안: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains many hesitations. Try to avoid filler words and complete your thoughts. Also, provide specific examples to explain why you felt the teacher was strict.

예시: Yes, when I was in 7th grade, our math teacher was very strict. She often got angry with students and did not explain the lessons clearly. Because of this, I once complained to the school about her teaching style.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to express your ideas more confidently and clearly. Also, explain why you prefer a rule-free school and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: I want to become a businessman, so teaching is not my first choice. However, if I had the chance to work as a teacher, I would prefer a rule-free school because students could enjoy learning more freely.

× Just during my school days, there are many, there were many rules uh, which student have to obey.

✓ Just during my school days, there were many rules which students had to obey.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present and past tense with 'are' and 'were'. Since the context is about past school days, 'there were' is appropriate. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many rules'. The verb 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match the past context.

× Just during my school days, there are many, there were many rules uh, which student have to obey.

✓ Just during my school days, there were many rules which students had to obey.

The pronoun 'student' is singular but should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many rules' and the context.

× For example, uh, making discipline in classes, wearing proper uniforms and stay attentive during the assembly.

✓ For example, maintaining discipline in classes, wearing proper uniforms, and staying attentive during the assembly.

The phrase 'making discipline' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'maintaining discipline'. Also, parallel structure requires all verbs to be in the same form: 'wearing' and 'staying'.

× Yes, uh, it matters because if students would follow all the rules, they make a disciplined life, they have to stay focused in their work, They have more productive, Moreover, they have uh, moreover, they can do everything.

✓ Yes, it matters because if students follow all the rules, they lead a disciplined life, they have to stay focused on their work, they become more productive, and moreover, they can do everything.

The conditional sentence should use 'if students follow' (present simple) for real conditions, not 'would follow'. 'Make a disciplined life' is incorrect; 'lead a disciplined life' is correct. 'Have more productive' is incomplete; it should be 'become more productive'. Also, 'stay focused in their work' should be 'stay focused on their work'.

× Yes, I still remembered one of my favorite teachers uh, was Hindi teacher and she was very dedicated regarding to their work.

✓ Yes, I still remember one of my favorite teachers, who was a Hindi teacher, and she was very dedicated to her work.

The verb 'remembered' is past tense but the present perfect 'still remember' is more appropriate to express ongoing memory. 'Regarding to their work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'dedicated to her work'.

× Yes, I still remembered one of my favorite teachers uh, was Hindi teacher and she was very dedicated regarding to their work.

✓ Yes, I still remember one of my favorite teachers, who was a Hindi teacher, and she was very dedicated to her work.

The pronoun 'their' is plural but refers to a singular teacher; it should be 'her'.

× She T, she taught uh, everything to our class and even on a small or little things.

✓ She taught everything to our class, even small or little things.

The phrase 'even on a small or little things' is incorrect; 'even small or little things' is correct without 'on' and 'a'.

× From my perspective, there are more rules in schools because mostly the students learn about the different kind of rules during the school days.

✓ From my perspective, there are many rules in schools because mostly the students learn about different kinds of rules during their school days.

'More rules' is comparative but no comparison is made; 'many rules' is better. 'The different kind of rules' should be 'different kinds of rules' to match plural.

× So with the help of rules they can make discipline in their life.

✓ So with the help of rules, they can maintain discipline in their lives.

'Make discipline' is incorrect; 'maintain discipline' is correct. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' to agree with 'they'.

× They can do each thing on a showing time.

✓ They can do each thing at the right time.

'On a showing time' is incorrect and unclear; the correct phrase is 'at the right time'.

× Yes, when I was in 7th grade, that time our math teacher was very strict and I didn't like that teacher because every time they just umm, angry with their students and moreover, they didn't umm, teach us very well.

✓ Yes, when I was in 7th grade, our math teacher was very strict and I didn't like that teacher because every time he was angry with his students and moreover, he didn't teach us very well.

The singular subject 'teacher' requires singular pronouns and verbs: 'he was angry' and 'he didn't teach'. Using 'they' is incorrect here.

× So there was one day, uh, I just complained on.

✓ So there was one day when I just complained.

The phrase 'complained on' is incorrect; 'complained' does not require a preposition here.

× Well, I want to become as a businessman.

✓ Well, I want to become a businessman.

The preposition 'as' is unnecessary after 'become'; the correct phrase is 'become a businessman'.

× I, I didn't interest to work as a teacher, but if I, uh, ever get a chance, uh, yes, so I definitely work, uh, working as a teacher, but in a role free school because, umm, umm, students can enjoy everything.

✓ I am not interested in working as a teacher, but if I ever get a chance, yes, I would definitely work as a teacher, but in a rule-free school because students can enjoy everything.

'Didn't interest' is incorrect; the correct form is 'am not interested in'. 'Work, uh, working' is redundant; 'would definitely work' is better. 'Role free' should be 'rule-free'.