Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答内容具体且相关，但有些口语填充词（如“uh”）影响流畅度。建议减少口语填充词，回答时更自然流畅。同时，回答可以稍微简洁，避免重复。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students cannot bring unregulated electrical appliances like hair dryers or electric kettles to the dormitory. Also, everyone must return to the dorm before 11:00 PM.

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students. For example, rules about electrical appliances help ensure our safety by preventing fire hazards, which is very important.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇和连接词。

예시: Yes, my academic supervisor during my undergraduate studies was very dedicated. She often initiated conversations with me and cared about both my studies and personal life. Moreover, she encouraged me to join many academic competitions, which greatly helped my future studies.

제안: 回答表达清晰且有逻辑，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富词汇表达。

예시: I think rules are important; however, I prefer fewer rules because they would give me more freedom and flexible time to do what I want, rather than being confined by the school's strict schedule.

제안: 回答内容具体，但句子结构较简单。建议使用连接词丰富句子，同时避免重复词汇。

예시: Yes, I currently have a strict teacher who teaches international business law. She frequently assigns many discussion tasks and homework, and she is very strict about ensuring we understand the basic knowledge.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（如“want to fewer rules”），建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I would say no. Although I prefer fewer rules as a student, as a teacher I believe rules are necessary to discipline students and help them behave better, which makes my job easier.

× the regulations regarding electrical appliances are to safeguard our students safety and avoid potential fire hazards caused by excessive power and we benefit a lot from this.

✓ the regulations regarding electrical appliances are to safeguard our students' safety and avoid potential fire hazards caused by excessive power, and we benefit a lot from this.

The phrase 'students safety' lacks the possessive apostrophe. It should be 'students' safety' to indicate that the safety belongs to the students. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× She encourages me to participate a lot of UH academic competitions which are of great help of my future study.

✓ She encourages me to participate in a lot of UH academic competitions which are of great help to my future study.

The verb 'participate' requires the preposition 'in' before the object. Also, 'help of my future study' should be 'help to my future study' to correctly express the benefit.

× She encourages me to participate a lot of UH academic competitions which are of great help of my future study.

✓ She encourages me to participate in many UH academic competitions which are of great help to my future study.

The quantifier 'a lot of' is informal and less precise here; 'many' is more appropriate for countable nouns like 'competitions' in formal speech.

× Well I would say no because as a student I want to fewer rules, but as a teacher I need rules to discipline the students and make them behave better, which makes my job easier.

✓ Well, I would say no because as a student I want fewer rules, but as a teacher I need rules to discipline the students and make them behave better, which makes my job easier.

The phrase 'want to fewer rules' is incorrect; 'want' should be directly followed by the object without 'to'. The correct phrase is 'want fewer rules'.