Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but somewhat disorganised and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific rules with linking words. Avoid mixing tenses and ensure subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms, arrive on time, and are strictly prohibited from cheating during exams.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but includes hesitations and some awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to contrast ideas clearly and avoid filler words. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: I believe students benefit from having some good rules; however, if too many strict rules are imposed, they might hinder students' creativity and freedom of expression.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly, use linking words, and avoid filler words. Provide specific examples of why the teacher was dedicated.

예시: Absolutely. My favourite teacher was my high school English teacher from the United States. He made lessons enjoyable and encouraged everyone to participate, which made us love learning English.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Use correct vocabulary ('rules' not 'roles') and adverbs ('freely' not 'freedomly'). Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because it encourages students to think independently and express their ideas freely. Therefore, having fewer rules can foster creativity and confidence.

제안: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to explain the effects of the teacher's strictness.

예시: Yes, I had a very strict Chinese teacher in primary school. She often punished students during class, which made everyone afraid of her and dislike the lessons.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Use clear and complete sentences, avoid filler words, and provide reasons logically connected with linking words.

예시: To be honest, I would not like to be a school teacher because I lack patience. Moreover, as a mother, I think managing many children would be very challenging.

× Actually, I have worked for several years, but I still remembered when I was a student in primary school, we couldn't put on our casual clothes instead of the uniform clothes.

✓ Actually, I have worked for several years, but I still remember when I was a student in primary school, we couldn't put on our casual clothes instead of the uniform clothes.

The verb 'remembered' is in the past tense, but the auxiliary 'still' suggests a present state. The correct form is the present tense 'remember' to indicate a current memory.

× We can't be late, we can't cheat on exam.

✓ We couldn't be late, we couldn't cheat on exams.

The sentence refers to past rules, so the modal verb 'can't' should be in past form 'couldn't'. Also, 'exam' should be plural 'exams' to refer generally to tests.

× maybe uh, it will be the barrier to the creativity for the students.

✓ maybe uh, it will be a barrier to creativity for the students.

The article 'the' before 'barrier' is incorrect; 'a' is appropriate here. Also, 'the creativity' should be 'creativity' without 'the' because it is an uncountable noun used generally.

× Uh, he is a foreigner from United States.

✓ Uh, he is a foreigner from the United States.

The country name 'United States' requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× He always makes classes for fun and uh, you know, uh, make everyone loves to uh.

✓ He always makes classes fun and, you know, makes everyone love them.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Makes classes for fun' should be 'makes classes fun'. Also, 'make everyone loves to' is incorrect; it should be 'makes everyone love them' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct verb form.

× For me, I prefer to have a fewer roles at school.

✓ For me, I prefer to have fewer rules at school.

'Roles' is incorrect; the intended word is 'rules'. Also, 'a fewer' is incorrect; 'fewer' is used without 'a' for countable nouns.

× I think school should encourage students to think independently and express their ideas freedomly.

✓ I think school should encourage students to think independently and express their ideas freely.

'Freedomly' is not a correct adverb form. The correct adverb is 'freely'.

× So I think, uh, fewer roles will help a lot to, uh, this.

✓ So I think, uh, fewer rules will help a lot with this.

'Roles' should be 'rules'. Also, 'help a lot to this' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'.

× She always she always punished students during the classroom.

✓ She always punished students during the class.

The phrase 'during the classroom' is incorrect; 'during the class' is correct. Also, the repetition 'She always she always' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'She always'.

× Everyone was afraid of the teacher and doesn't like.

✓ Everyone was afraid of the teacher and didn't like her.

The verb tense should be past 'didn't like' to match 'was afraid'. Also, the object pronoun 'her' is needed after 'like'.

× To be honest I never want to be a school teacher because I'm lack of patience and as a mother I I think umm there it must be a tough work to be a teacher with so many children.

✓ To be honest, I never want to be a school teacher because I lack patience and, as a mother, I think it must be tough work to be a teacher with so many children.

'I'm lack of patience' is incorrect; it should be 'I lack patience'. The phrase 'there it must be a tough work' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it must be tough work'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.