Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and does not provide enough information. Try to give a complete sentence and add some details to make your response more natural and effective. For example, mention some specific rules or explain briefly why there are no rules.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual, which help maintain discipline.

제안: Your answer is very brief and lacks explanation. To improve, give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I don't think students would benefit from more rules because too many restrictions can limit their creativity and freedom to learn.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to answer directly and provide supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain your experience.

예시: I have never had a really dedicated teacher; therefore, I usually study on my own to understand the subjects better.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question. You should state your preference clearly and explain why, using complete sentences and supporting details.

예시: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because it creates a more relaxed environment that encourages learning.

제안: Your answer is brief but relevant. To improve, add more details about how the teacher was strict and how it affected you, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I had a really strict teacher in my FSC class who enforced discipline strictly, which helped me stay focused on my studies.

제안: Your answer is informal and incomplete. Try to answer the question directly and provide reasons for your choice using complete sentences and linking words.

예시: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I believe some rules are necessary to maintain order and support students' learning.

× I study my own.

✓ I study on my own.

The phrase 'study my own' is incorrect because the verb 'study' should be followed by the preposition 'on' when indicating doing something independently. The correct expression is 'study on my own.' This is a common collocation in English to express self-study.

× I'm not a teacher material.

✓ I'm not teacher material.

The phrase 'a teacher material' is incorrect because 'teacher material' is an uncountable noun phrase and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.