Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「student are prohibited」ではなく「students are prohibited」と複数形にする必要があります。また、「such as Union High School or high school」は不自然で不要です。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、具体的な理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring smartphones because these devices can distract them from focusing on their studies.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と動詞の一致や文の構造を整理し、明確な意見を述べることが必要です。具体的な例を挙げて、論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: I think it depends on the student. Those who are responsible and understand the rules may not need strict regulations, but students who are less disciplined might benefit from more rules.

제안: 回答が否定的であり、文法や表現が不自然です。「every teachers」は「every teacher」と単数形にし、文の意味を明確にする必要があります。質問に対してもっと具体的な説明や例を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: I have not met a very dedicated teacher yet because sometimes teachers focus more on their own opinions rather than understanding students like me.

제안: 回答が短く、文法的に不完全です。「I prefer few rules」より「I prefer fewer rules」が正しい表現です。また、理由をもっと詳しく説明し、文をつなげて自然な流れにしましょう。

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because having more freedom allows me to do more activities and learn independently.

제안: 文法の誤りが目立ちます。「I have ever such a strict teacher」ではなく「I have ever had such a strict teacher」が正しいです。また、「was were very like kind and loose to me」は不自然なので、「were kind and lenient」などの表現を使いましょう。

예시: No, I don't think I have ever had a really strict teacher. All the teachers I have met were kind and lenient with me.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりません。質問に対して明確な意見を述べ、文を完結させる練習が必要です。具体的な理由や条件を述べると良いでしょう。

예시: This is a difficult question. If students are responsible and can manage themselves, working in a rule-free school would not be difficult for me as a teacher.

× For example, student are prohibited from bringing their own smartphone because their devices such as smartphone can umm distract students from concentrating on studying at school.

✓ For example, students are prohibited from bringing their own smartphones because their devices such as smartphones can distract students from concentrating on studying at school.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match 'devices' and the context of multiple students having devices.

× For example the individual who can take care of themselves and and know where about the rules they those come though uh, the strict strict rules doesn't need for them, but students who are not is needed.

✓ For example, the individuals who can take care of themselves and know about the rules, those strict rules are not needed for them, but students who are not need them.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match 'themselves' and 'know'. 'Doesn't need' should be 'are not needed' to agree with plural 'rules'. 'Students who are not is needed' is incorrect; it should be 'students who are not need them' or 'students who are not capable need them.'

× I think I've never had such a teacher in my life because every teachers, uh, of course a human, so they think themselves rather than the students such as me, including me.

✓ I think I've never had such a teacher in my life because every teacher, of course, is human, so they think of themselves rather than the students such as me.

'Every teachers' is incorrect; 'every' is followed by singular noun 'teacher'. Also, 'think themselves' should be 'think of themselves' to be grammatically correct.

× No, I don't think I have ever such a strict teacher in my life. Every teacher I've met was were very like kind and loose to me.

✓ No, I don't think I have ever had such a strict teacher in my life. Every teacher I've met was very kind and lenient to me.

'Have ever such' is incorrect; it should be 'have ever had such'. 'Was were' is incorrect; choose one verb form. 'Loose' is incorrect adjective here; 'lenient' or 'kind' is appropriate.

× This is difficult question because if the student in the IT had in the school were capable of taking taking off themselves like the task is the task are not difficult for me as a teacher but.

✓ This is a difficult question because if the students in the IT department at the school were capable of taking care of themselves, the tasks would not be difficult for me as a teacher.

'Difficult question' needs an article 'a'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'were'. 'Taking taking off themselves' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'taking care of themselves'. 'Task is the task are' is incorrect; 'tasks would not be' is correct.