Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, clarify your points with better structure and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we must attend the assembly every morning, and we are not allowed to bring homemade food; instead, we have to eat at the school canteen.

제안: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I believe that having more rules helps students become more disciplined because they encourage us to follow guidelines strictly.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Provide more specific details about why the teacher was dedicated to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher named Mr. Sonat Shrestha. He always helped students patiently and made lessons interesting.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how rules help students.

예시: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students stay disciplined and develop good learning habits.

제안: Be careful with sensitive topics; express your opinion clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow with linking words.

예시: Yes, I remember our vice principal was very strict. He punished students harshly if they couldn't answer questions, which I think was not a good approach.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Use correct expressions and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Honestly, teaching is not my preferred career; I would rather be a student. However, if I had the chance to teach in a school without strict rules, I would consider it.

× Yes, in our country, there are so many rules in our school.

✓ Yes, in our country, there are many rules in our school.

The phrase 'so many' is informal and can be replaced with 'many' for a more appropriate and formal expression in this context.

× We have to eat there in.

✓ We have to eat there.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase 'eat there' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× Rules helps us to be disciplined and to follow them strictly and I believe that the rules help more for the student.

✓ Rules help us to be disciplined and to follow them strictly, and I believe that the rules help students more.

The subject 'Rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also, 'help more for the student' is awkward; it should be 'help students more' for clarity and correctness.

× His name is Sonat Shrestha.

✓ His name was Sonat Shrestha.

Since the student is referring to a past time ('when I was in school'), the verb 'is' should be in past tense 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× He was so good person.

✓ He was a very good person.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'person' and 'so good' is better expressed as 'very good' for natural English usage.

× I think more rules will be better to keep a student in disciplined manner and uh, to create them with learning skills.

✓ I think more rules will be better to keep students disciplined and to help them develop learning skills.

'A student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement. 'In disciplined manner' is incorrect; 'disciplined' is an adjective here. 'Create them with learning skills' is awkward; 'help them develop learning skills' is clearer.

× He used to beat us with long stick just because we don't remember the answer of the question he asked.

✓ He used to beat us with a long stick just because we didn't remember the answer to the question he asked.

The phrase 'don't remember' should be in past tense 'didn't remember' to match 'used to beat'. Also, 'long stick' needs the article 'a'. 'Answer of the question' should be 'answer to the question'.

× But if I got chance to take part in role free teaching.

✓ But if I got the chance to take part in rule-free teaching.

The phrase 'got chance' needs the article 'the' to be correct. Also, 'role free' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free' as it refers to teaching without rules.