Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear conclusion.

예시: Yes, there were many rules at my school. For example, we had to wear uniforms and complete our own homework. These rules helped me develop discipline and responsibility, which benefited me throughout my life.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to explain your reasoning. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and be careful with word choice.

예시: I think it depends on the purpose of the rules. If the rules help students progress and learn discipline, they are beneficial. However, if the rules hinder their success, then they might not be helpful.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding informal phrases like 'like' and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas more smoothly.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher who always supported us. He encouraged me to participate in sports and public speaking competitions, which helped me develop confidence and skills.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: Although I have finished school, I believe rules are essential because they make life easier and help maintain organization and discipline. These rules benefit students throughout their lives.

제안: Your answer has some confusion with pronouns and verb tenses. Make sure to be consistent and clear. Also, explain your opinion with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I had a very strict teacher who always required us to complete our homework. However, I gradually realized that this was beneficial because it taught us discipline.

제안: Your answer contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

예시: I would never want to work in a rule-free school because without rules, it would be difficult to maintain discipline and organization among students.

× I remember when I was in my school, there is a lot of rules.

✓ I remember when I was in my school, there were a lot of rules.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in my school'), so the verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'were' to agree with the time frame. Also, 'rules' is plural, so 'were' is appropriate.

× there is a lot of rules.

✓ there are a lot of rules.

The phrase 'a lot of' is followed by a plural noun 'rules', so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is'.

× I have to wear uniform

✓ I have to wear a uniform

The noun 'uniform' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I feel these rules made my life.

✓ I feel these rules made my life better.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'better' clarifies the meaning and completes the thought.

× These rules gave me discipline and.

✓ These rules gave me discipline.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× This can be really tricky question for me.

✓ This can be a really tricky question for me.

The noun 'question' is singular and countable, so it requires the article 'a' before it.

× They can learn discipline uh from the roles.

✓ They can learn discipline from the rules.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'rules'. Also, 'uh' is a filler and should be omitted in formal speech.

× If the rules uh impedes their success, then they can never be good.

✓ If the rules impede their success, then they can never be good.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'impede' (base form) after 'if' for present tense conditional, not 'impedes'.

× Like he encouraged me to participate in the sports as well as in the public speak, speaking competitions.

✓ He encouraged me to participate in sports as well as in public speaking competitions.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'sports' and 'public speaking'. Also, 'public speak' is incorrect; the correct term is 'public speaking'.

× Personally, I have passed my school, but I feel rules are essential for UH schools because they made everybody's life easy and because of the rules, everything can be organized and disciplined.

✓ Personally, I have finished school, but I feel rules are essential for schools because they make everybody's life easy and because of the rules, everything can be organized and disciplined.

The phrase 'passed my school' is incorrect; 'finished school' is appropriate. 'UH' seems to be a typo and is removed. Also, 'made' should be 'make' to agree with present tense 'rules are essential'.

× They are good for students for their whole life.

✓ They are good for students throughout their whole life.

Adding 'throughout' clarifies the duration. 'For their whole life' is less natural than 'throughout their whole life'.

× He always compelled us to complete the homework.

✓ He always compelled us to complete the homework.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× But gradually I realized this is this was a good for us and we learned discipline from her.

✓ But gradually I realized this was good for us and we learned discipline from her.

The phrase 'this is this was' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'this was'. Also, 'a good' should be 'good' without 'a'.

× I think never ever because if there will be no rule then it will be really hard for me to make student disciplined and do something in a organized way.

✓ I think never, because if there were no rules, then it would be really hard for me to make students disciplined and do things in an organized way.

The phrase 'if there will be no rule' is incorrect; the correct conditional form is 'if there were no rules'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'A organized' should be 'an organized' because 'organized' starts with a vowel sound.

× So I don't think I can be work in any role free school.

✓ So I don't think I can work in any rule-free school.

The phrase 'can be work' is incorrect; it should be 'can work'. Also, 'role free' is a misspelling of 'rule-free'.