Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating similar words. Try to make your answer more natural and concise.

예시: Yes, my school has strict rules and regulations that all students must follow.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I believe more rules can help students behave better and prevent problems like bullying, which is common in many schools.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some hesitation. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, when I was in 12th grade, I struggled with subjects like maths and accounts. My dedicated teacher, Miss Ritika, always helped me by explaining difficult concepts clearly.

제안: Your answer is understandable but lacks coherence and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to express your mixed opinion clearly and avoid repetition.

예시: I have mixed feelings about this. While rules are important to maintain discipline, having too many can be restrictive. So, I think a balanced number of rules is best.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Avoid redundancy and finish your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to explain your experience logically.

예시: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in 9th grade. For example, when we asked questions, she often replied rudely, which made it difficult to approach her.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repetition and use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. Also, use correct vocabulary like 'decorum' instead of 'decorator'.

예시: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because rules are essential to maintain discipline and ensure that students from different backgrounds behave appropriately.

× Yes, of course we have a strict rules and regulations for students in the school.

✓ Yes, of course we have strict rules and regulations for students in the school.

The word 'rules' is plural, so the adjective 'strict' should not have 'a' before it. 'A' is used with singular nouns, but 'rules' is plural, so 'a' should be removed.

× Yes, students would be benefited for more rules as they are for their own beneficial moral act as they behave in certain manner and for example most of the schools have bullying cases.

✓ Yes, students would benefit from more rules as they are for their own moral benefit, helping them behave in a certain manner; for example, most schools have bullying cases.

The phrase 'would be benefited' is incorrect; 'would benefit' is the correct modal verb usage. Also, 'for more rules' should be 'from more rules'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Uh, I had a very dedicated teacher name Miss Ritika and she always take care of me and help me in solving my problems.

✓ Uh, I had a very dedicated teacher named Miss Ritika and she always took care of me and helped me in solving my problems.

The verb 'take' should be in past tense 'took' to agree with 'had'. Similarly, 'help' should be 'helped'. Also, 'name' should be 'named' to correctly describe the teacher.

× I have mixed opinion in this.

✓ I have a mixed opinion on this.

The phrase 'mixed opinion in this' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' when expressing opinions about a topic. Also, 'a' is needed before 'mixed opinion' as it is singular.

× She was very strict and As for example if we went to her to ask some question or to ask some problem so she would reply very rudely and very in static manner.

✓ She was very strict. For example, if we went to her to ask some questions or to discuss some problems, she would reply very rudely and in a static manner.

The phrase 'As for example' is incorrect; 'For example' is sufficient. 'Some question' should be 'some questions' (plural). 'Some problem' should be 'some problems'. 'Very in static manner' is incorrect; it should be 'in a static manner'. Also, the sentence was split for clarity.

× I rather not be working work as teacher in a rural free school as as I mentioned above rules are very important to maintain a decorator decorum for the school so that children can behave in a manner certain manner as children are from different backgrounds.

✓ I would rather not work as a teacher in a rule-free school as, as I mentioned above, rules are very important to maintain decorum in the school so that children can behave in a certain manner since children are from different backgrounds.

The phrase 'I rather not be working work' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'I would rather not work'. 'Rural free school' is a mishearing of 'rule-free school'. 'Decorator decorum' is incorrect; it should be 'decorum'. Also, 'in a manner certain manner' should be 'in a certain manner'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correctness.