Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. Use clear and complete sentences to express your ideas naturally and effectively. For example, finish your thoughts and avoid leaving sentences hanging.

예시: Yes, there are several important rules for students to follow at my secondary school. For instance, students must queue up to buy food during recess, and our school has a very strict dress code, which includes specific requirements for female students.

제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Make sure your ideas are fully expressed and linked logically. Use linking words to connect your points clearly.

예시: I suppose it really depends on the individual's personality. For example, students who are in their rebellious phase might find rules unnecessary and want to challenge authority more. However, other students might benefit from clearer rules because they provide structure and guidance.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use correct verb tenses and plural forms to sound more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, when I was in primary school, I had a Chinese teacher who taught Mandarin. She often stayed after class to help students and even organised tutorial classes during holidays to ensure every student understood the topics well.

제안: Complete your sentences and avoid vague endings. Use precise vocabulary such as 'fewer' instead of 'lesser' for countable nouns. Finish your ideas clearly.

예시: If I had to choose, I would definitely prefer fewer rules. More rules often mean more restrictions, which can limit our creativity and imagination. By having fewer constraints, we can explore new ideas and think creatively to develop our skills.

제안: Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences and pronoun errors. Use correct pronouns and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, avoid symbols or placeholders in your speech.

예시: Yes, I have a lecturer who is very strict. For example, she is skeptical about online classes because she thinks we might not be in front of the computer. Therefore, she always conducts physical classes to ensure we attend in person.

제안: Improve sentence fluency and grammar. Use correct article usage and plural forms. Also, use linking words to balance your ideas.

예시: That's an interesting question. I have never thought about it before, but I suppose it might be a very interesting experience because students would have much freedom to explore their interests and be creative. However, it might also be a little chaotic.

× students must queue up to buy foods during recess

✓ students must queue up to buy food during recess

The word 'food' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'foods'. In English, 'food' is generally used in singular form when referring to it in general.

× our school has also very strict dress code which include female students need to.

✓ our school also has a very strict dress code which includes female students needing to.

The phrase 'very strict dress code' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'very strict dress code'. Also, 'dress code' is singular, so the verb should be 'includes'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected to fit grammar rules.

× For example, for students who in who are in their rebellious phase, they might feel the rules are unnecessary and might want them to challenge the authority even more.

✓ For example, students who are in their rebellious phase might feel the rules are unnecessary and might want to challenge the authority even more.

The phrase 'for students who in who are' is redundant and incorrect. Removing extra words improves clarity and sentence structure.

× And for other students might be benefit from clearer rules because they.

✓ And other students might benefit from clearer rules because they...

The phrase 'might be benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'might benefit'. Also, the sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.

× She often stay after class to help students and even organise a tutorial class during holiday to ensure every students understood the topics well.

✓ She often stayed after class to help students and even organised a tutorial class during holidays to ensure every student understood the topics well.

The verb 'stay' should be in past tense 'stayed' to match 'often' in past context. 'Organise' should be 'organised' for past tense consistency. 'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' and 'students' should be singular 'student' after 'every'.

× If I had to choose, I would definitely prefer lesser rules.

✓ If I had to choose, I would definitely prefer fewer rules.

'Rules' is a countable noun, so 'fewer' should be used instead of 'lesser', which is used for uncountable nouns.

× she might think us are not in front of the computer.

✓ she might think we are not in front of the computer.

The subject pronoun 'we' should be used instead of the object pronoun 'us' as the subject of the clause.

× So ** *** will always conduct a physical class to ensure we are we attend physically.

✓ So she will always conduct a physical class to ensure we attend physically.

The sentence had missing subject 'she' and redundant words 'we are we'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× If it's such an interesting questions, I have never thought about it before, but I suppose it might be very interesting experience because students have much freedom to explore their interests and create creativity, but it might be a little bit chaotic also.

✓ If it's such an interesting question, I have never thought about it before, but I suppose it might be a very interesting experience because students have much freedom to explore their interests and be creative, but it might be a little bit chaotic also.

The plural 'questions' should be singular 'question'. 'Interesting experience' needs the article 'a'. 'Create creativity' is incorrect; 'be creative' is the correct phrase.