Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must be punctual because attendance is compulsory to pass courses, which helps us develop good time management skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. Try to finish your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar points and provide specific examples or reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they encourage punctuality and time management. For example, strict deadlines for assignments can improve academic performance by promoting discipline.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and fluent by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific examples of the teacher's dedication.

예시: Yes, I have a dedicated teacher in my project management course this semester. Mr. Reza is very disciplined; he insists on punctuality and strictly enforces deadlines, which motivates us to stay organized.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating the same ideas.

예시: I don't mind whether there are more or fewer rules at school because I am punctual and always complete my coursework on time. Therefore, rules don't affect me much personally.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'he's the most strict I have ever seen'. Also, clarify your points more smoothly.

예시: Yes, my project management teacher, Mr. Reza, is the strictest I've had. However, his strictness is positive because he enforces punctuality and does not accept late submissions, which helps us stay disciplined.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for better flow. Also, try to express your ideas more naturally and concisely.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because I value punctuality and believe rules are necessary to maintain discipline, which makes teaching more effective.

× The student must be on time or they will not be allowed to enter the class because the teachers want us to learn about time management and also the attendance is compulsory in my school and to pass the course.

✓ Students must be on time or they will not be allowed to enter the class because the teachers want us to learn about time management and also attendance is compulsory in my school to pass the course.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'The student' (singular) followed by 'they' (plural pronoun), causing a singular and plural mismatch. Changing 'The student' to 'Students' aligns the subject with the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'the attendance' is better as 'attendance' without 'the' in this context.

× Yes indeed students will benefit more from more rules because it will teach them at early age about time management and help them be punctual and also if there are strict guidelines to complete the schoolwork on time, it will help them to boost their academic performance and also help them to improve their.

✓ Yes indeed, students will benefit more from more rules because it will teach them at an early age about time management and help them be punctual. Also, if there are strict guidelines to complete the schoolwork on time, it will help them boost their academic performance and improve themselves.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity at the end ('help them to improve their.'). Adding 'themselves' completes the thought. Also, 'at early age' should be 'at an early age' to be grammatically correct. The sentence is long and should be split for clarity.

× Well it totally doesn't affect me if there are few rules or more rules because I'm a good student and I always follow rules and I would say I'm punctual and I respect time management and I always be on time and complete my coursework on time so the rules doesn't affect me.

✓ Well, it totally doesn't affect me if there are few rules or more rules because I'm a good student and I always follow rules. I would say I'm punctual and I respect time management. I am always on time and complete my coursework on time, so the rules don't affect me.

The phrase 'I always be on time' is incorrect; it should be 'I am always on time' to use the correct present tense. Also, 'the rules doesn't affect me' should be 'the rules don't affect me' to agree with the plural subject 'rules'. Splitting the sentence improves clarity.

× As I have mentioned earlier about my project management teacher, Reza, I would say he's the most strict teacher I have ever seen. But he's strict in positive way. But most of the students do not like him because he's so much punctual and he's he doesn't allow late submissions. So yeah, he's the most strict I have ever seen.

✓ As I have mentioned earlier about my project management teacher, Reza, I would say he's the strictest teacher I have ever seen. But he's strict in a positive way. Most of the students do not like him because he's very punctual and he doesn't allow late submissions. So yeah, he's the strictest I have ever seen.

The phrase 'he's so much punctual' is incorrect; it should be 'he's very punctual'. Also, 'he's he doesn't allow' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'he doesn't allow'. 'Most strict' should be 'strictest' to use the superlative form correctly.

× No, I will never like to work in Rule free school because because I am punctual and I want everyone else to be punctual too. So if the place is rule free so I think it will be harder for me to control and teach the students because they will not be disciplined without any rules.

✓ No, I would never like to work in a rule-free school because I am punctual and I want everyone else to be punctual too. So if the place is rule-free, I think it will be harder for me to control and teach the students because they will not be disciplined without any rules.

The phrase 'I will never like to work' is unnatural; 'I would never like to work' is more appropriate for expressing preference. 'Rule free school' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free school' and preceded by the article 'a'. Also, the sentence has a redundant 'because because' which is corrected to a single 'because'. The second 'so' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.