Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, there are some rules at my school, NCCU. However, students enjoy a lot of freedom as long as they don't break the law.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并提供具体理由。

예시: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students because too many rules can limit their creativity and independent thinking. Students should learn to be responsible for themselves.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议简化句子，明确表达老师的敬业精神，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher when I was a reporter for NCCU online. He was very responsible and gave me many useful suggestions to improve my articles.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误和语法问题，表达可以更自然。建议注意单复数和冠词的使用，并补充具体原因。

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because I am a responsible person, and too many rules can make me feel stressed.

제안: 回答中时态和表达不准确，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确时态，表达更自然，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I had a very strict English teacher in senior high school. Her strictness made me lose interest in learning English, so I believe students should have more freedom.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免无意义的句子结尾。

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because the job is very busy and stressful, especially dealing with students and their parents.

× Yes, it might be some rules in any school, but in my school which is called NCCU, we have a lot of freedom to do anything but just don't break the law.

✓ Yes, there might be some rules in any school, but in my school, which is called NCCU, we have a lot of freedom to do anything as long as we don't break the law.

这里'might be some rules'用法不当，应该用'there might be'表示存在某物，符合英语习惯。'but just don't break the law'缺少主语，改为'as long as we don't break the law'更完整。

× No, I think student will not be benefit to more and more roles because these rules may be restrict their thoughts or their creativity.

✓ No, I think students will not benefit from more and more rules because these rules may restrict their thoughts or their creativity.

student应为复数students，roles应为rules，且动词benefit后应接介词from，restrict后不加to。

× So I think students should be responsible for their self.

✓ So I think students should be responsible for themselves.

反身代词错误，'their self'应为'themselves'，表示复数主语的反身代词。

× Yes, I was a reporter at NCCUUU online and the teacher of the news was pretty responsible for our news and he will get give many advice to my passage.

✓ Yes, I was a reporter at NCCUUU online and the teacher of the news was pretty responsible for our news and he gave me a lot of advice on my passage.

时态错误，描述过去经历应使用过去时，'will get give'不合语法，应改为过去时'gave'。advice是不可数名词，前面用'a lot of'。

× I prefer to have fewer roles at school because I think I'm a pretty responsible person and I think too much rules may make me stress out.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think I'm a pretty responsible person and I think too many rules may make me stressed out.

roles应为rules，too much用于不可数名词，rules为可数名词应使用too many。stress out应为形容词形式stressed out。

× She taught English but I can't feel any passion from learning English in her course.

✓ She taught English but I couldn't feel any passion for learning English in her course.

时态不一致，描述过去经历应使用过去时，can't改为couldn't。介词用法错误，passion后应接for。

× So I think it is better to have freedom to their students.

✓ So I think it is better to give freedom to their students.

动词搭配错误，have freedom to不正确，应使用give freedom to。

× I think in any circumstances I will not work as a teacher in the future because I think teacher is pretty busy and always being depressed about their students or their students parents.

✓ I think under any circumstances I will not work as a teacher in the future because I think teachers are pretty busy and always depressed about their students or their students' parents.

介词用法错误，in any circumstances应为under any circumstances。teacher应为复数teachers，谓语动词用are。'always being depressed'应改为'always depressed'。'students parents'应加所有格's。

× I think it will significantly.

✓ I think it will be significant.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，'significantly'为副词，应改为形容词'significant'并加上系动词be。