Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 다소 모호하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 더 명확하고 간결하게 답변하며, 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하세요. 예를 들어, 'I don't remember many rules because I left school a long time ago, but I do recall that skirts had to be below the knee.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

예시: I don't remember many rules because I left school a long time ago, but I do recall that skirts had to be below the knee. That was an important rule we had to follow.

제안: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'depends on'과 같은 전치사 사용에 주의하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'It definitely depends on the school and the need for strict rules. I believe students feel more comfortable when they can follow their own preferences, but I understand schools enforce rules to maintain order.'

예시: It definitely depends on the school and the need for strict rules. I believe students feel more comfortable when they can follow their own preferences, but I understand schools enforce rules to maintain order.

제안: 답변이 다소 혼란스럽고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I have had some dedicated teachers. One of them was my advertising professor at university, who made the classes enjoyable and helped me learn a lot.'

예시: Yes, I have had some dedicated teachers. One of them was my advertising professor at university, who made the classes enjoyable and helped me learn a lot.

제안: 문장이 어색하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 바꾸세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer fewer rules because I believe freedom helps students feel comfortable and relaxed at school.'

예시: I prefer fewer rules because I believe freedom helps students feel comfortable and relaxed at school.

제안: 표현이 다소 부자연스럽고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'hit us with rules'는 부적절한 표현입니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, when I was in primary school, I had a very strict teacher who enforced many rules. It was difficult, and I don't have good memories of that time.'

예시: Yes, when I was in primary school, I had a very strict teacher who enforced many rules. It was difficult, and I don't have good memories of that time.

제안: 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하고, 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'It's not my dream to work in a rule-free school, but it sounds interesting. Maybe I would try it in the future and see how it works.'

예시: It's not my dream to work in a rule-free school, but it sounds interesting. Maybe I would try it in the future and see how it works.

× It would definitely depends of the school and the necessity to implement this kind of strict rules.

✓ It would definitely depend on the school and the necessity to implement this kind of strict rules.

The modal verb 'would' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'depends' should be 'depend'. Also, the correct preposition after 'depend' is 'on', not 'of'.

× It would definitely depends of the school and the necessity to implement this kind of strict rules.

✓ It would definitely depend on the school and the necessity to implement this kind of strict rules.

The verb 'depend' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'of'. Using 'of' here is incorrect.

× I do believe that students can feel more comfortable if they just follow their own instance and likes, but I can understand why schools do that.

✓ I do believe that students can feel more comfortable if they just follow their own instincts and likes, but I can understand why schools do that.

The word 'instance' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'instincts' to mean natural tendencies or feelings.

× I really appreciate all the efforts she puts to teach me and to help me to love the classes.

✓ I really appreciate all the effort she puts into teaching me and helping me to love the classes.

The word 'efforts' is plural but 'all the effort' is more natural here. Also, 'puts to teach' should be 'puts into teaching' for correct verb-preposition usage.

× So yeah, I had dedicated teacher.

✓ So yeah, I had a dedicated teacher.

The singular noun 'teacher' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Where in my case, I will prefer fewer rules because I consider that freedom is important to students to feel comfortable and to feel more.

✓ In my case, I would prefer fewer rules because I consider that freedom is important for students to feel comfortable and to feel more.

The phrase 'Where in my case' is incorrect; it should be 'In my case'. Also, 'important to students' should be 'important for students'.

× So in my personal case, I would definitely love to feel heartwarming on the place themselves.

✓ So in my personal case, I would definitely love to feel heartwarming in the place itself.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in' is appropriate for locations. Also, 'themselves' should be 'itself' to agree with the singular noun 'place'.

× She also hit us with rules for us to obey.

✓ She also gave us rules for us to obey.

The verb 'hit' is incorrect in this context; 'gave' or 'imposed' would be appropriate to describe setting rules.

× I don't consider that of one of my dreams, but considering that it will be rule for school, maybe I could try in the future.

✓ I don't consider that one of my dreams, but considering that there will be rules for school, maybe I could try in the future.

The phrase 'consider that of one of my dreams' is incorrect; it should be 'consider that one of my dreams'. Also, 'it will be rule for school' should be 'there will be rules for school'.

× That sound interesting and I would definitely be really interested on see that in future, so hopefully I will get there.

✓ That sounds interesting and I would definitely be really interested to see that in the future, so hopefully I will get there.

The verb 'sound' should be 'sounds' to agree with singular subject 'That'. The phrase 'interested on see' is incorrect; it should be 'interested to see'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future'.