Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口头语，增强表达的连贯性和准确性。

예시: Yes, at my university, students must park their bicycles in designated areas. This rule helps keep the campus organized and ensures the safety of pedestrians.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并避免语法错误。

예시: I think it depends on the type of rules. For example, rules related to road safety are beneficial because they protect students, but overly strict rules might be unnecessary and restrictive.

제안: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意动词时态和词汇选择，使表达更准确自然。

예시: Yes, I was lucky to have a caring supervisor during my master's studies. She was attentive not only to my research progress but also to my physical and mental health, often encouraging me to take breaks.

제안: 回答重复且不完整，建议简化句子，避免重复，明确表达观点，并补充具体理由。

예시: I prefer fewer rules regarding students' personal lives to allow more freedom, but I believe there should be more rules to maintain discipline in academic matters.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议注意时态一致性和词汇准确性，提升表达的自然度。

예시: I have never had an overly strict teacher. They were all easygoing and kind, which created a supportive and encouraging learning environment. They encouraged us to ask questions and did not pressure us too much.

제안: 回答未完成且表达不完整，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯，并避免语法错误。

예시: It depends on the type of school. For example, in a primary school, rules are necessary because young children are easily influenced. These rules help regulate their behavior and language effectively.

× Yes, there is a role at our university is that students must park their bicycles in designated areas in which can keep the campus organized and safe, but also keep the uh, other pedestrians safe from the bicycles and the trans trans uh.

✓ Yes, there is a rule at our university that students must park their bicycles in designated areas, which can keep the campus organized and safe, and also keep other pedestrians safe from the bicycles and transportation.

句中“there is a role”中的“role”应为“rule”，且句子结构不完整，缺少连接词“that”引导定语从句，且“in which can keep”应改为“which can keep”，以正确表达限定关系。

× Well personally I think it depends on the situation. For example some rules like the those related to Rd. safety, they can ensure the students from transportation and keep them safe while others may not be reasonable enough and they are over strict and.

✓ Well, personally I think it depends on the situation. For example, some rules like those related to road safety can protect students from transportation risks and keep them safe, while others may not be reasonable enough and are overly strict.

“the those”重复使用限定词，应去掉“the”；“ensure the students from transportation”表达不准确，应改为“protect students from transportation risks”；“over strict”应改为“overly strict”以正确使用副词修饰形容词。

× Yes, it was fortunate for me to have a caring supervisor during my master's degree studies. She not only concerned about my research process progress but also a tentative to my physical and mental health conditions. She always encourage encouraged me to have a rest.

✓ Yes, I was fortunate to have a caring supervisor during my master's degree studies. She not only was concerned about my research progress but also attentive to my physical and mental health conditions. She always encouraged me to take a rest.

“was fortunate for me to have”表达不自然，改为“I was fortunate to have”；“concerned”缺少助动词“was”；“a tentative”用词错误，应为“attentive”；“encourage”时态错误，应为过去式“encouraged”；“have a rest”更常用表达为“take a rest”。

× Personally I think it depends on the type of the rules. For example, I think there should there should be less rules about students personal life which should the school should give more freedom and independence for the students, but I think there should be more rules.

✓ Personally, I think it depends on the type of rules. For example, I think there should be fewer rules about students' personal lives, and the school should give more freedom and independence to the students, but I think there should be more rules in other areas.

“less rules”应改为“fewer rules”，因为“rules”是可数名词；“students personal life”应为“students' personal lives”，表示复数所有格；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× Well I think I had never had an over restricted teacher. They were all easygoing and kind which make the study environment supportive and encouraging. They encourage us to ask questions about the A project and do not put too much pressure on us.

✓ Well, I think I have never had an overly strict teacher. They were all easygoing and kind, which made the study environment supportive and encouraging. They encouraged us to ask questions about the project and did not put too much pressure on us.

“had never had”时态不当，改为现在完成时“have never had”；“over restricted”用词错误，应为“overly strict”；“make”应为过去式“made”；“encourage”应为过去式“encouraged”；“do not”应为过去式“did not”。

× It depends on the type of the school. If I worked as a teacher in a primary school, their rules are necessary because during this age children are easily influenced. Then rules are necessary to regulate their behavior and language which could.

✓ It depends on the type of school. If I worked as a teacher in a primary school, its rules would be necessary because children at this age are easily influenced. Then rules are necessary to regulate their behavior and language.

“the type of the school”中“the”多余，应去掉；“their rules”指代不明，应改为“its rules”指代单一学校；句子末尾不完整，去掉“which could”使句子完整。