Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding a linking phrase to connect your ideas more smoothly and by providing a bit more specific detail about the rules.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school to maintain discipline and respect. For instance, students must attend classes on time and wear the school uniform at all times, which helps create a sense of unity and professionalism.

제안: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrases. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your sentences more coherent by using linking words. Also, clarify your examples with specific details.

예시: I believe that having more rules can be beneficial to some extent because they help maintain discipline and provide structure in the learning environment. For example, clear guidelines on behavior and attendance encourage students to stay focused and responsible.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor grammar issues and avoiding filler sounds like 'UH'. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better.

예시: Yes, I was fortunate to have a dedicated teacher during my high school years. She was passionate about her subject and went the extra mile by providing additional resources and personalized support to help students understand difficult concepts.

제안: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words like 'uh'. Also, clarify your points with better vocabulary and linking words to express contrast clearly.

예시: I prefer to have a balanced number of rules at school. While some rules are necessary to maintain discipline and safety, too many rules can restrict freedom and stifle creativity.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and some grammar errors. Avoid repeating words and use complete sentences with proper grammar. Also, avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, in ninth grade, I had a very strict math teacher. She often pointed out my mistakes and could sometimes be rude, but I understood that she wanted me to improve.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words and incomplete thoughts. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid fillers, and provide a direct response with supporting details.

예시: Yes, I would like to work as a teacher. Although I initially wanted to become an English teacher, I am now considering other professions. However, working in a rule-free school would be an interesting experience because it encourages creativity and freedom in teaching.

× I strongly believe that having more rules, uh, for students can be beneficial to some extent as the rules help, uh, maintain discipline and create a structure to learning environment.

✓ I strongly believe that having more rules for students can be beneficial to some extent as the rules help maintain discipline and create a structure for the learning environment.

The phrase 'create a structure to learning environment' is incorrect because the preposition 'to' is not appropriate here. The correct preposition is 'for' when referring to creating a structure intended for something. Also, 'the learning environment' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the environment being discussed.

× Yes, I've been fortunate to have a really dedicated teacher doing my high school years.

✓ Yes, I've been fortunate to have a really dedicated teacher during my high school years.

The phrase 'doing my high school years' is incorrect because 'doing' is not the correct verb to describe the time period when the teacher was present. The correct preposition is 'during' to indicate the time span when the teacher was involved.

× She was always passionate about her subject and went the extra mile to help students understand difficult UH concepts by providing additional resources and personalized support.

✓ She was always passionate about her subject and went the extra mile to help students understand difficult concepts by providing additional resources and personalized support.

The filler 'UH' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity and correctness. There is no prepositional error here, but removing filler words improves sentence quality.

× Yeah, there was a situation when in the ninth grade, I had a really strict, strict math T teacher. She always pointed at my mistakes and even sometimes could be rude with me. But I realized that she's just teacher and wants, uh, do better.

✓ Yeah, there was a situation when in the ninth grade, I had a really strict math teacher. She always pointed out my mistakes and sometimes could be rude to me. But I realized that she's just a teacher and wants to do better.

Several issues here: 'pointed at' should be 'pointed out' as the correct phrasal verb. 'Rude with me' should be 'rude to me' because 'rude to' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'She's just teacher' lacks the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'wants, uh, do better' is missing 'to' before 'do'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, I would like to work as a teacher. Actually, uh, I've been thinking to become a English teacher, but uh, now I've changed my mind and looking for another, uh, profession, uh, for me.

✓ Yes, I would like to work as a teacher. Actually, I've been thinking about becoming an English teacher, but now I've changed my mind and am looking for another profession for me.

The phrase 'thinking to become' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'thinking about becoming'. Also, 'a English teacher' should be 'an English teacher' because 'English' starts with a vowel sound. 'Looking for another profession' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense.