Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific examples of rules at your school to make your response more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as wearing uniforms, being punctual, and respecting teachers and classmates.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains a spelling mistake ('roles' instead of 'rules'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail.

예시: Yes, I strongly believe that students benefit from more rules because they teach discipline and help students become more organised, which can later contribute to their success in life.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by avoiding informal expressions like 'I feel myself lucky' and by adding linking words to make the response more coherent.

예시: I have been fortunate to have several highly dedicated teachers. For example, my primary school teacher, Mr Zahid, was extremely committed to his profession and always went the extra mile to help students.

제안: There are several spelling mistakes ('roles' instead of 'rules') and some unclear phrases. Try to organise your ideas clearly using linking words and avoid redundancy for a more natural answer.

예시: I prefer to have more rules at school because they provide clear guidelines on expected behaviour, which helps maintain organisation and reduces problems.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and informal. Try to avoid repeating the same word and use more varied vocabulary. Also, provide specific examples to support your points.

예시: Yes, I had a strict teacher in primary school who was very firm with grading and classroom discipline, which helped us stay focused.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural by avoiding awkward phrasing. Try to explain your preference with reasons and use linking words for coherence.

예시: No, I would prefer to work in a school with many rules because they create a structured environment that supports both teaching and learning.

× I strongly believe that students benefit from more roles because it teaches them discipline.

✓ I strongly believe that students benefit from more rules because it teaches them discipline.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'rules' as the context is about regulations, not positions or functions. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs because the wrong word changes the meaning of the sentence.

× I prefer to have more roles at school because more rules give clear direction to what is expected in terms of behaviour of the students.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school because more rules give clear direction to what is expected in terms of behaviour of the students.

The word 'roles' is incorrectly used instead of 'rules'. 'Rules' refers to regulations, which fits the context, while 'roles' means positions or functions. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs leading to a wrong word choice.

× So and I think more roles have more organization within the school, more less challenges.

✓ So, I think more rules lead to more organisation within the school and fewer challenges.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'roles' should be 'rules'; 'more less challenges' is incorrect and should be 'fewer challenges' because 'challenges' is countable; also, 'organisation' is the Australian spelling. The sentence structure is improved for clarity. This involves incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and quantifiers.