Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਅਰਥ ਸਮਝਣਾ ਮੁਸ਼ਕਲ ਹੁੰਦਾ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਬਦਲੋ ਅਤੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ 3-5 ਵਾਕਾਂ ਤੱਕ ਸੀਮਿਤ ਰੱਖੋ। ਇਸ ਨਾਲ ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਗੱਲਬਾਤ ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ਪ੍ਰਭਾਵਸ਼ਾਲੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ।

예시: Yes, my school has several rules. These rules teach students discipline and respect for others. For example, we are expected to be punctual and polite. These rules help us create a positive environment.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਅਰਥ ਨੂੰ ਪ੍ਰਭਾਵਿਤ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਦੇ ਨਿਯਮਾਂ ਅਨੁਸਾਰ ਬਣਾਓ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਜਿਵੇਂ ਕਿ 'because' ਜਾਂ 'therefore' ਤਾਂ ਜੋ ਜਵਾਬ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਅਤੇ ਤਰਕਸੰਗਤ ਬਣੇ।

예시: Yes, I believe more rules can help students. Because rules teach us discipline and guide us to make better choices. Therefore, students can achieve success by following them.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਅਰਥ ਅਧੂਰਾ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਪੂਰਾ ਕਰੋ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੀਆ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ। ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਸਹੀ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਸ਼ਾਮਲ ਕਰੋ ਤਾਂ ਜੋ ਗੱਲਬਾਤ ਸੁਚੱਜੀ ਲੱਗੇ।

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in my 10th grade. She was in charge of our class and cared about both studies and sports. She encouraged us to do our best in all activities.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਅਰਥ ਨੂੰ ਸਮਝਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੁਕਾਵਟ ਪੈਦਾ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਬਦਲੋ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਜਿਵੇਂ ਕਿ 'because' ਜਾਂ 'so'।

예시: I prefer more rules at school because they help students learn important skills. For example, rules teach us how to manage time and stay focused. So, rules help us achieve our goals.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਅਰਥ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਦੇ ਨਿਯਮਾਂ ਅਨੁਸਾਰ ਬਣਾਓ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੀਆ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ 3-5 ਵਾਕਾਂ ਤੱਕ ਸੀਮਿਤ ਰੱਖੋ।

예시: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in 10th grade. She insisted that we complete all our homework on time. If we didn't, she would ask us to finish it during class.

× And definitely my school.

✓ Definitely, my school has rules.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding a subject and verb completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Instruction to the student to the proper discipline in the daily life and how to meet any other person.

✓ There are instructions for students on proper discipline in daily life and how to interact with others.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, making it unclear. Rephrasing with 'There are' and proper verb forms clarifies the meaning.

× That time will show the positive response and behaviour in front of the person because the first impression in the last operation.

✓ At that time, students show positive responses and behavior because first impressions are important.

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Rewriting it with clear subjects and verbs improves clarity and correctness.

× Absolutely student can.

✓ Absolutely, students can.

The singular noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the context of general statements.

× Under the rules, they can do the things better in their life.

✓ Under the rules, they can do things better in their lives.

The phrase 'do the things' is incorrect; 'do things' is more natural. Also, 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people.

× They can to achieve the success in the life because if they have not to.

✓ They can achieve success in life because if they do not,

The phrase 'can to achieve' is incorrect; 'can achieve' is correct. Also, 'the success in the life' should be 'success in life'. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× Under any rule they can to not be choose good path in the life.

✓ Without any rules, they cannot choose a good path in life.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and confusing. Rewriting it with correct modal verb usage and word order clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I saw that that type of teachers in my 10th strand ended was my in charge of my class.

✓ Yes, I saw that type of teacher in my 10th standard; he was in charge of my class.

'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to match 'that type'. 'Strand' is corrected to 'standard'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× They are the very dedicated about the study and the sports.

✓ They are very dedicated to study and sports.

The phrase 'dedicated about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'dedicated to'.

× They always force the student uh, to get the 100% on the study and sports and they also.

✓ They always encourage the students to give 100% in studies and sports.

'Force' is too strong and unnatural here; 'encourage' is better. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. The sentence is incomplete and rephrased for clarity.

× I prefer the more role in the school if any children have to under the rule, they can to learn the many things in the small is how how to manage the time in the daily life and how to folks in the life endure go on to go to our goals and get the better result.

✓ I prefer more rules in school because if children follow the rules, they can learn many things, such as how to manage time in daily life and how to face challenges to achieve their goals and get better results.

'Role' should be 'rules'. 'Have to under the rule' is incorrect; corrected to 'follow the rules'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have to work with the base attack teachers because it's not my math teachers in my 10th grade because they are the very strict about the studies if students are not to be done the homework in the class so they can finish.

✓ Yes, I had to work with strict teachers, especially my math teacher in 10th grade, because they were very strict about studies. If students did not complete their homework in class, they had to finish it later.

The original sentence has multiple errors including tense, pronoun use, and sentence structure. It is rewritten for clarity and correctness.