Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'must have to wear' to 'must wear' and 'have to quite' to 'have to be quiet'. Use linking words like 'for example' to connect ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a uniform, which is mandatory. Also, when attending class, they have to be quiet and listen carefully to the teacher.

제안: Focus on clear and correct sentence structures. Avoid negative phrases like 'You shouldn't get benefit' when you mean the opposite. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'as a result' properly to connect ideas. Try to reduce filler words and improve vocabulary usage.

예시: Absolutely, students benefit from following more rules. For example, if they attend every class and listen quietly to the instructor, they can understand concepts better and develop their knowledge effectively.

제안: Use singular or plural forms correctly, for example, 'a number of dedicated teachers' instead of 'number of uh dedicated teacher'. Avoid repetition like 'teach or teach student'. Use linking words such as 'therefore' or 'as a result' appropriately. Try to be more specific about what makes the teacher dedicated.

예시: Yes, I have had several dedicated teachers who are very enthusiastic about teaching. They always try their best to help students, and as a result, students feel more motivated to learn.

제안: Correct grammar mistakes such as 'a children' to 'children' and 'adjust with them' to 'adapt to them'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas clearly. Provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: I prefer to have more rules because they help children develop discipline. For example, if students follow rules at school, they can adapt better to workplace environments later in life.

제안: Use correct expressions such as 'a number of teachers' and 'realistic' should be 'strict'. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'sometimes they when they are strict'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples of how strict teachers help students.

예시: Yes, I have had several strict teachers who are also humble and supportive. For instance, even when they are strict, they help students improve and feel encouraged.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'I don't understand to work as a teacher'. Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Express your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about why rules are important.

예시: I am not sure about working as a teacher, but I believe it is important for students to follow rules. If I become a teacher, I would set strict rules because they help students learn better and stay disciplined.

× Definitely, there are a number of rules students have to follow whenever they, uh, want to go school.

✓ Definitely, there are a number of rules students have to follow whenever they, uh, want to go to school.

The preposition 'to' is missing after 'go' when referring to going to a place. The correct phrase is 'go to school'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× First of all, uh, they have, must have to wear, uh, uniform, which is mandatory for every school.

✓ First of all, uh, they must wear a uniform, which is mandatory for every school.

The phrase 'have, must have to' is incorrect and redundant. The correct modal verb usage here is 'must wear'. Also, 'uniform' needs an article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun.

× So, uh, there are also some rules like, uh, whenever they attend class, that time they have to quite, uh, just for, listen, instructor or teacher.

✓ So, uh, there are also some rules like, uh, whenever they attend class, at that time they have to be quiet and listen to the instructor or teacher.

The phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time' to indicate a specific time. 'Quite' is incorrect; it should be 'quiet'. Also, 'listen instructor' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to the instructor' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.

× You shouldn't get benefit from following rules.

✓ You should get benefit from following rules.

'Shouldn't' is incorrect here because the sentence intends to express a positive outcome. The correct modal verb is 'should' to indicate that following rules is beneficial.

× Like if a student follow rules such as they attend a every class and they could uh, listen instructor quietly.

✓ Like if a student follows rules such as attending every class and listening to the instructor quietly.

The verb 'follow' should be 'follows' to agree with the singular subject 'a student' (subject-verb agreement). 'A every class' is incorrect; 'every class' does not need 'a'. Also, 'listen instructor' should be 'listen to the instructor'.

× Like if a student follow rules such as they attend a every class and they could uh, listen instructor quietly.

✓ Like if a student follows rules such as attending every class and listening to the instructor quietly.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'a every class' is incorrect; 'every class' is correct without 'a'.

× Yes, I know number of uh dedicated teacher who are really enthusiastic to teach or teach student and as much as possible they try to do their best to teach their student.

✓ Yes, I know a number of dedicated teachers who are really enthusiastic to teach students and as much as possible they try to do their best to teach their students.

'Number of' should be preceded by 'a' to form 'a number of'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'a number of'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to multiple students.

× As a result, children are more satisfied to learn from this teacher.

✓ As a result, children are more satisfied to learn from these teachers.

'This teacher' is singular but the context refers to multiple teachers. It should be 'these teachers' to agree with 'children' and the plural context.

× I prefer to have more rules because it's really important for children. If a children follow rule in school or university, they can adjust with them.

✓ I prefer to have more rules because it's really important for children. If children follow rules in school or university, they can adjust to them.

'A children' is incorrect because 'children' is plural and does not take 'a'. 'Follow rule' should be 'follow rules' to match plural. Also, 'adjust with them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'adjust to them'.

× If a children follow rule in school or university, they can adjust with them.

✓ If children follow rules in school or university, they can adjust to them.

'Adjust' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'a children' is incorrect; 'children' is plural and does not take 'a'.

× As a result, whenever they do job in office or work, they can easily adjust it.

✓ As a result, whenever they do a job in an office or work, they can easily adjust to it.

'Do job' should be 'do a job' because 'job' is countable. 'In office' should be 'in an office' to use the correct article. Also, 'adjust it' should be 'adjust to it' because 'adjust' requires the preposition 'to'.

× I know number of teacher who are realistic but to be honest they are very humble about teaching students.

✓ I know a number of teachers who are realistic but to be honest they are very humble about teaching students.

'Number of' should be preceded by 'a' to form 'a number of'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'a number of'.

× As much as possible they try to teach their student and whenever they feel like upset they also support them.

✓ As much as possible they try to teach their students and whenever they feel upset they also support them.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'their'. 'Feel like upset' is incorrect; it should be 'feel upset'.

× But it's really beneficial for student uh, sometimes they when they are strict.

✓ But it's really beneficial for students, uh, sometimes when they are strict.

'For student' should be 'for students' to match plural. The phrase 'sometimes they when they are strict' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes when they are strict'.

× Uh, basically, I don't understand to work as a teacher, but uh, it is mandatory to follow rules students.

✓ Uh, basically, I don't understand working as a teacher, but uh, it is mandatory for students to follow rules.

'Don't understand to work' is incorrect; it should be 'don't understand working'. Also, 'mandatory to follow rules students' is incorrect; it should be 'mandatory for students to follow rules'.

× So if I, uh, if I appreciate to teach someone or teach in a school that time, obviously I will try to, uh, provide strict rules for a student, which is really helpful for them.

✓ So if I, uh, if I have the opportunity to teach someone or teach in a school at that time, obviously I will try to, uh, provide strict rules for students, which are really helpful for them.

'Appreciate to teach' is incorrect; it should be 'have the opportunity to teach'. 'That time' should be 'at that time'. 'A student' should be 'students' to match plural. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'rules'.