Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免使用数字“1”代替“one”，并且注意冠词使用。可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, there are many rules at my school. The strictest one is that we are not allowed to use electric vehicles on campus. Since the campus is very large, I have to walk from my dormitory to my classroom every day.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I believe most rules benefit students because they guide us on what to do and how to behave. However, some rules are too strict and unreasonable, as I mentioned earlier.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复“dedicated”，并且提供更具体的细节。

예시: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher named Louie. She specializes in teaching dance and has over 15 years of experience. She even taught me how to teach primary school students.

제안: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并且避免模糊表达。

예시: I prefer to have more useful rules at school. For example, smoking should be banned in the dormitory because it is dangerous and the smell is unpleasant. Currently, there is no such rule, so I think it should be introduced.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用更准确的词汇，如将“straight”改为“strict”，并且使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have met a strict teacher. I believe everyone encounters one during their studies. She cared about my daily life and health, but was strict only when it came to my studies.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免语法错误，并使表达更自然。

예시: Actually, I would not like to work as a teacher in a school without rules. As a student, I prefer order. Without rules, it would be very difficult to manage students, and many problems could happen.

× Yes, there are a lot of rules in my school and the most strict 1 is that we can't use any electric vehicles in our campus.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules in my school and the strictest one is that we can't use any electric vehicles on our campus.

这里“the most strict 1”应改为“the strictest one”，因为“most strict”是最高级，应该用形容词最高级形式“strictest”，且“1”应写为“one”。另外，“in our campus”应改为“on our campus”，因为“campus”作为地点，通常用介词“on”。

× But the campus is really big so I should walk from my dormitory to classroom every day.

✓ But the campus is really big so I have to walk from my dormitory to the classroom every day.

“to classroom”缺少冠词，应为“to the classroom”。另外，“should”表达建议，这里描述习惯动作，使用“have to”更合适。

× I think most of rules are benefits for students because they can teach us what we should do and how we can do.

✓ I think most of the rules are beneficial for students because they can teach us what we should do and how we can do it.

“most of rules”应为“most of the rules”，需要定冠词“the”。“benefits”作为名词复数不合适，改为形容词“beneficial”。“how we can do”后应加宾语“it”。

× She is dedicated in dancing skills of students.

✓ She is dedicated to teaching students dancing skills.

“dedicated in”用法错误，应为“dedicated to”。“dancing skills of students”表达不自然，改为“teaching students dancing skills”更准确。

× So she taught me how to teach students in primary school and she was working for this area for more than 15 years.

✓ So she taught me how to teach students in primary school and she has been working in this area for more than 15 years.

“was working”表示过去进行时，不符合时间状况，改为现在完成时“has been working”表示持续至今。介词“for this area”应为“in this area”。

× I prefer to have more useful rules at school, such as I think smoking should be banned in the dormitory because it's so dangerous and the smell is not good, but there's no rules in our school now so I think this should be proved.

✓ I prefer to have more useful rules at school, such as banning smoking in the dormitory because it's so dangerous and the smell is unpleasant, but there are no rules in our school now so I think this should be approved.

“there's no rules”应为“there are no rules”，主谓一致。动词“proved”用错，应为“approved”表示批准。

× She is only straight on my study.

✓ She is only strict about my study.

“straight”用错，应为“strict”，表示严格。介词“on”应为“about”。

× Actually not. I only want to study in a row for school as a student.

✓ Actually not. I only want to study in a regular school as a student.

“study in a row for school”表达不正确，应为“study in a regular school”，表示正常的学校。

× If I'm a teacher, the school has no rules.

✓ If I'm a teacher, the school has no rules.

此句无语法错误，符合语境。

× I think the terrible things will be happened.

✓ I think terrible things will happen.

“will be happened”错误，动词“happen”不用于被动语态，正确用法是“will happen”。