Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer covers the main rules but contains many hesitations and filler words like 'uh'. Try to reduce these to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, avoid repeating similar points and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'At my school, students must wear uniforms and maintain neatness. Additionally, they are required to bring lunches from home and are prohibited from using mobile phones to maintain discipline. Moreover, speaking in English is encouraged to improve language skills.'

예시: At my school, students must wear uniforms and keep themselves tidy. Additionally, they have to bring their own lunches and are not allowed to use mobile phones during school hours. Moreover, speaking in English is compulsory to help us improve our communication skills.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by hesitations and some unclear phrases like 'high Standard Life dis'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect points logically. Also, avoid repeating the same idea. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because they promote discipline and help maintain focus, which are essential for leading a successful life.'

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they encourage discipline and help us stay focused on our studies. This, in turn, leads to a better and more organised lifestyle.

제안: Your answer is relevant and provides supporting details, but it contains hesitations and some awkward phrasing like 'each and everything that he teaches'. Try to speak more fluently and use precise expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, I had a very dedicated Hindi teacher in high school. He taught in an interesting way and explained every concept clearly so that we could understand and relate it to our own experiences.'

예시: Yes, I had a dedicated Hindi teacher in high school. He taught in an engaging manner and explained all topics clearly, which helped us understand better and connect the lessons to our daily lives.

제안: Your answer expresses your opinion well but is affected by many hesitations and some repetition. Try to be more concise and use linking words to organise your ideas. For example, 'I prefer fewer rules at school because they allow children to be more independent and feel freer. Too many rules can feel burdensome and restrict happiness.'

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because they give students more independence and freedom. Having too many rules can make students feel restricted and unhappy.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has hesitations, unclear phrases, and incomplete thoughts like 'So that is one negative thing that I neg'. Try to organise your answer clearly, avoid filler words, and complete your ideas. For example, 'Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in grade 4. She taught well but focused only on students who understood quickly, ignoring others, which was unfair.'

예시: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in grade 4. Although she taught well, she paid attention only to students who understood quickly and ignored those who struggled, which was a negative aspect.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and some repetition. Try to express your ideas more fluently and use linking words to connect points. For example, 'Working as a teacher in a rule-free school would be difficult because students might not listen or behave properly. Therefore, I believe rules are necessary to maintain discipline and respect in schools.'

예시: I think working as a teacher in a school without rules would be challenging because students may not listen or behave well. Hence, rules are important to ensure discipline and respect in the classroom.

× People can stay focused.

✓ People can stay focused.

No correction needed here as 'stay focused' is correct; 'focused' is an adjective here, not a verb form error.

× students would benefit more from most roles

✓ students would benefit more from more rules

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'rules'. 'Roles' refers to parts or functions, while 'rules' refers to regulations. This is a singular/plural and word choice issue.

× lead a uh, lead a quite uh, high Standard Life dis Being disciplined is a very helpful thing in life.

✓ lead a quite high standard life. Being disciplined is a very helpful thing in life.

The sentence is fragmented and contains filler words. 'dis' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Standard' should not be capitalized. The phrase 'lead a quite high standard life' is correct after correction.

× The way he teaches is really interesting and uh, he explains each and everything that he teaches to the students that so that they can understand better and also they can relate to their lifetime experiences.

✓ The way he teaches is really interesting and he explains everything he teaches to the students so that they can understand better and relate to their life experiences.

The phrase 'each and everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices. 'That so that' is incorrect; 'so that' is correct. 'Lifetime experiences' is better expressed as 'life experiences'. These corrections improve clarity and grammar.

× if there are less rules, people would be, I mean, the children would be more, uh, more, uh, independent

✓ if there are fewer rules, people would be, I mean, the children would be more independent

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns; 'rules' is countable, so 'fewer' is correct. Also, removing repeated fillers improves sentence clarity.

× The other children are being ignored and, you know, considered as, uh, foolish people.

✓ The other children are ignored and considered foolish people.

'Are being ignored' suggests a continuous action; 'are ignored' is more appropriate here. 'Considered as' should be 'considered' without 'as'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy.

× To work as a teacher in a referee school is really difficult

✓ To work as a teacher in a rule-free school is really difficult

'Referee school' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'rule-free school'. This is a word choice error involving prepositions and compound adjectives.