Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific examples. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, mention a particular rule and explain why it is important.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school that students must follow. For instance, we are not allowed to leave the school premises during class hours to ensure our safety and focus on studies.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Try to avoid repetition and be more specific about how rules benefit students.

예시: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they promote discipline and respect towards elders and teachers. Moreover, following rules helps us develop good habits that are useful throughout life.

제안: Provide a clear answer with specific details about one dedicated teacher. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher who always encouraged us to be respectful and honest. She cared deeply about our progress and spent extra time helping students who struggled.

제안: Answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be careful with word choice and sentence clarity. For example, explain how rules help develop values and create a positive environment.

예시: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop important values such as honesty and respect. Overall, having rules creates a positive learning environment that benefits everyone.

제안: Give a clear and concise answer with specific examples. Avoid filler words and improve grammar and sentence flow.

예시: Yes, I had a strict science teacher named Juan Mogul. He insisted that our handwriting be neat and clean, and he carefully checked our work to ensure it met his standards.

제안: Provide a clear and complete answer. Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words. Explain why working in a rule-free school might be beneficial or challenging.

예시: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it would allow me to be creative in my teaching methods and help students learn through imagination and exploration.

× Yes, there are various kind of umm rules and regulations in schools which we have to follow while being students.

✓ Yes, there are various kinds of umm rules and regulations in schools which we have to follow while being students.

The phrase 'various kind' is incorrect because 'various' implies plural, so the noun following it should be plural as well. Therefore, 'kind' should be 'kinds' to agree in number with 'various'.

× Umm we do not umm go out if we enter the school on and we can umm we still properly follow that rules.

✓ Umm we do not umm go out once we enter the school and we still properly follow those rules.

The word 'rules' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'those' instead of 'that'. Also, 'that rules' is incorrect because 'that' is singular and 'rules' is plural, causing a singular/plural mismatch.

× Yes, following rules will be benefit for the students because it helps us to stay disciplined and respectful, respectful to ours elders and as well as teachers.

✓ Yes, following rules will be a benefit for the students because it helps us to stay disciplined and respectful, respectful to our elders as well as teachers.

The phrase 'will be benefit' is incorrect because 'benefit' is a noun and needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'ours elders' is incorrect; the correct possessive pronoun is 'our' without 's'.

× It also makes us disciplined and obeying person in life.

✓ It also makes us disciplined and obedient people in life.

The phrase 'obeying person' is incorrect because 'obeying' is a verb form and 'person' is singular, but the subject 'us' is plural. The correct adjective is 'obedient' and the plural noun is 'people' to agree with 'us'.

× Yes umm in my school there are many umm hardworking teachers which teach us on moral and respectfully umm, they are very dedicated to ours, their work and they are very umm genuine and loves us and take our care care.

✓ Yes, umm in my school there are many umm hardworking teachers who teach us morals and respect. They are very dedicated to their work, and they are very genuine, love us, and take care of us.

The relative pronoun 'which' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Teach us on moral and respectfully' is incorrect; it should be 'teach us morals and respect'. 'Ours' is incorrect here; it should be 'their' to refer to the teachers' work. 'Loves' should be 'love' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Take our care care' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take care of us'.

× I prefer having more rooms at schools because umm they have students develop important values like honesty and respect umm overall having rules.

✓ I prefer having more rules at school because they help students develop important values like honesty and respect. Overall, having rules is beneficial.

The word 'rooms' is incorrect in context; it should be 'rules'. 'At schools' should be 'at school' to refer generally. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Having more rules create a positive learning environment that benefits everyone.

✓ Having more rules creates a positive learning environment that benefits everyone.

The subject 'Having more rules' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'creates' instead of 'create' to agree in number.

× Yes, I have one science teacher whose name is Juan Mogul. He is really strict teacher while during my high schools he checked our handwriting also umm he need our handwriting so umm clean and out and we still also just properly and still be neat and clean.

✓ Yes, I have one science teacher whose name is Juan Mogul. He is a really strict teacher. During my high school, he checked our handwriting and he needed our handwriting to be clean and neat. We still properly keep it neat and clean.

'Strict teacher' needs an article 'a' before it. 'High schools' should be 'high school' to refer to the period. 'He need' should be 'he needed' to match past tense. The phrase 'so umm clean and out' is unclear and corrected to 'to be clean and neat'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, if I get a chance to work as a teacher in a real free school, I will definitely engage in there because as a teacher we can get a lot of learning processes and also can enhance our knowledge and vocabulary all through our imaginations and.

✓ Yes, if I get a chance to work as a teacher in a rule-free school, I will definitely engage there because as a teacher we can experience a lot of learning processes and also enhance our knowledge and vocabulary through our imaginations.

'Real free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'Engage in there' is incorrect; 'engage there' or 'get involved there' is better. 'Can get a lot of learning processes' is awkward; 'experience a lot of learning processes' is clearer. The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and corrected for completeness.