Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, at my school in Thailand, students must wear uniforms and keep their clothes tidy. Additionally, we are required to have short nails and maintain cleanliness. These rules help us present ourselves well and stay disciplined.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on giving a direct opinion and explain your reasons clearly with simple linking words.

예시: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. Too many rules might make students feel uncomfortable because they have to constantly adapt to new regulations.

제안: Your answer has good content but is incomplete and has grammar mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use correct verb tenses. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in secondary school. She was my English teacher and encouraged me to speak English every day. For example, we practiced speaking together in the evenings, which helped me improve a lot.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on giving a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer fewer rules at school because it helps students feel more comfortable and be themselves. For example, if the school reduces strict rules, students can enjoy recreation time more freely.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct grammar. Avoid unnecessary details and focus on answering the question directly.

예시: Yes, I had a strict teacher in elementary school. Sometimes she punished me, but I don't remember clearly because it was a long time ago. Overall, it was a difficult experience for me.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has many grammar mistakes. Give a clear opinion and explain your reasons with simple linking words and correct sentence structure.

예시: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules. Without rules, teachers and students might feel confused, and the school could become chaotic because students might run around without control.

× In Thailand the rules for students to be to wear the uniform and to be needs and tidy your clothes is good for yourself and have a short nail and clean everything.

✓ In Thailand, the rules for students are to wear the uniform, keep their clothes tidy, have short nails, and keep everything clean.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and structure, making it confusing. The phrase 'to be needs and tidy your clothes' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and parallel structure to list the rules clearly.

× No, I think the benefit from more rules is, I'm not entirely sure, but I think maybe it just moreover more than comfortable convenient for them because they have to adapt yourself to.

✓ No, I think the benefit from more rules is, I'm not entirely sure, but I think maybe it is more comfortable and convenient for them because they have to adapt themselves.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and phrases like 'moreover more than comfortable convenient' which is incorrect. Also, 'adapt yourself to' should be 'adapt themselves' to match the subject. The correction clarifies meaning and fixes pronoun use.

× Yes, I have ever had a dedicated teacher when I was in the secondary school and she is a She was a English T-shirt for me She encouraged me to speak in English every day and in the evening.

✓ Yes, I had a dedicated teacher when I was in secondary school. She was an English teacher for me. She encouraged me to speak English every day and in the evening.

The phrase 'I have ever had' is incorrect; 'I had' is appropriate for past experience. 'She is a She was a English T-shirt' is confusing and incorrect; corrected to 'She was an English teacher'. Also, 'speak in English' is better as 'speak English'. The correction fixes tense and word choice.

× We practice speaking English together every day and now I.

✓ We practiced speaking English together every day, and now I continue to do so.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb after 'now I'. The correction completes the sentence and maintains past tense consistency with 'practiced'.

× Yes, I prefer fewer rooms at school because it will help the student to comfortable and try to be themselves more than in the past.

✓ Yes, I prefer fewer rules at school because it will help students be more comfortable and try to be themselves more than in the past.

The word 'rooms' is incorrect; it should be 'rules'. Also, 'help the student to comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'help students be more comfortable'. The correction fixes word choice and grammar.

× For example, if the school reduce the roofs recreation they will the way.

✓ For example, if the school reduces the rules on recreation, it will improve the situation.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'Reduce the roofs recreation' is incorrect; it should be 'reduces the rules on recreation'. 'They will the way' is incomplete and unclear. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× Yes, I ever had a realistic T show when I was elementary school and not entirely sure about that because it's too long time ago and but she just hits me sometime when I was younger I think like that.

✓ Yes, I had a strict teacher when I was in elementary school, but I'm not entirely sure because it was a long time ago. She sometimes hit me when I was younger, I think.

'I ever had' is incorrect; 'I had' is correct. 'Realistic T show' is likely 'strict teacher'. 'Hits me sometime' should be 'hit me sometimes'. The correction fixes tense, word choice, and sentence structure.

× I can't remember vividly about that and it's feel bad for me too much.

✓ I can't remember vividly about that, and it feels bad for me too much.

'It's feel bad' is incorrect; it should be 'it feels bad'. The correction fixes verb agreement and adds a comma for clarity.

× No, because I think maybe that teacher into roof is cool.

✓ No, because I think maybe a teacher without rules is cool.

'Teacher into roof' is unclear; likely meant 'teacher without rules'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects word choice.

× They will confuse or uncomfortable because the everything in the school will chaos because no rules for example student have to deal with just run.

✓ They will be confused or uncomfortable because everything in the school will be chaotic without rules. For example, students would just run around without control.

The original sentence has multiple errors: missing verbs, incorrect word forms ('confuse' should be 'confused'), and unclear meaning. The correction fixes verb forms, adds missing verbs, and clarifies the meaning.