Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must be punctual, follow the dress code, and avoid cheating during exams. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số nhiều và số ít (e.g., 'too many rules' thay vì 'too much rules'). Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

예시: I think having too many rules can be counterproductive. Instead, schools should focus on teaching essential knowledge and practical skills, as well as promoting good morals among students.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn bằng cách tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý.

예시: Yes, I have. When I was in high school, I had an enthusiastic and dedicated English teacher who was very supportive and friendly. She helped me improve my English skills a lot, and I felt very grateful for her guidance.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'prefer' thay vì 'refer'), và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I don't prefer either more or fewer rules. In my opinion, the quality of the rules is more important. If the rules create a positive and stimulating environment, they are very effective and helpful.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số ít và số nhiều (e.g., 'a math teacher' thay vì 'a math teachers'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

예시: Yes, I have. When I was in secondary school, I had a strict math teacher. She always gave us plenty of exercises and homework, and required us to complete them on time. I often felt stressed because of that.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'rule-free' thay vì 'rural free'). Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school. It would require a lot of dedication and patience because students might be naughty and not follow any rules. This would make me feel stressed and anxious.

× My scores also has are assessed approvals in some comprehensive academic policy that avoid flight, tourism and cheating during the exams.

✓ My scores are also assessed according to some comprehensive academic policies that avoid flight, tourism, and cheating during the exams.

The subject 'scores' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'has'. Also, 'approvals' is incorrect here; 'policies' fits better. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

× Uh, the punctuality for students and adherent to the specific dress code, they are very effective and beneficial.

✓ Uh, punctuality for students and adherence to the specific dress code are very effective and beneficial.

The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and causes confusion. 'Adherent' is a noun meaning a supporter; the correct noun here is 'adherence'. The sentence is corrected for subject clarity and grammar.

× Having too much rules at school could be really counterproductive and I I think authorities at school should focus on the qualities and teaching some essential or knowledge and practical skill.

✓ Having too many rules at school could be really counterproductive, and I think authorities at school should focus on qualities and teaching some essential knowledge and practical skills.

'Rules' is plural, so 'much' should be 'many'. 'Qualities' and 'skills' should be plural to match the context. 'Or' is incorrect between 'essential' and 'knowledge'; it should be omitted.

× She always gave us a plenty of exercise and homework and require us to complete on time.

✓ She always gave us plenty of exercises and homework and required us to complete them on time.

'A plenty of' is incorrect; 'plenty of' is correct without 'a'. 'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match the context. Verb tense consistency requires 'required' instead of 'require'. Added 'them' for clarity.

× I used to have a math teachers when I was a secondary school student.

✓ I used to have a math teacher when I was a secondary school student.

'A' is singular, so it should be followed by a singular noun 'teacher', not plural 'teachers'.

× At that time my teachers was very strict.

✓ At that time my teacher was very strict.

The subject 'teacher' is singular, so the verb should be 'was' not 'were'. Also, 'teachers' is plural, inconsistent with 'was'.

× Working in there requiring me a lot of dedication and patience because student in that school look very naughty and don't abide by the regulations.

✓ Working there requires me to have a lot of dedication and patience because students in that school look very naughty and don't abide by the regulations.

'In there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient. 'Requiring' should be 'requires' to agree with the subject. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. Added 'to have' for correct verb structure.

× I feel very stressed and it may suffer me a greater sense of anxiety.

✓ I feel very stressed and it may cause me a greater sense of anxiety.

'Suffer me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'cause' in this context. The sentence is adjusted for natural expression.